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FANDOM SNOWFLAKE CHALLENGE #6

In your own space, Create something. Leave a comment in this post saying you did it. Include a link to your post if you feel comfortable doing so.

This is all about unleashing your creative side. Work on that fan story/art/vid/meta/whatever else you can think of. Have something original you’ve wanted to noodle with? Go for it.

But it doesn’t have to just be the written word or a drawing. Creativity is much more inclusive. I enjoy making jewelry. Maybe you are into yarn/thread/fabric. Compose music? Create recipes? Planning your garden for this year?


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"The Body Farm"

Joan hunted through the brownstone until she found Sherlock sprawled on the couch with an icepack over his head. Again.

"I believe I may have found a solution to your problems, or at least, something worth trying that will have benefits whether it solves everything or not," Joan said.

One eye squinched open. "You found a solution to my post-concussion syndrome that doctor has not?"

"I think so," said Joan. "I do have a medical degree ... and he doesn't work with the police."

Both eyes were now open. "You have my attention," said Sherlock. "What is this solution?"

"We're going to visit the body farm in North Carolina," said Joan.

"The Forensic Osteology Research Station?" Sherlock said, sitting up. The ice pack slid down to land in his lap, ignored. "It's quite difficult to gain access there."

"Well, an old friend of mine works on the faculty. I explained the situation, and she got us a three-month observation slot," said Joan. "Your brain needs time away from your usual work -- especially computer screens! -- to heal, but you need the mental stimulation to stay focused. This way, you'll be out in nature, benefitting from fresh air and natural light, but you'll also get slow input relevant to solving crimes."

"By observing corpses left outdoors," Sherlock said.

"Think of it like a mandala in meditation," said Joan. "It gives you a focus so your mind can relax."

"I've tried meditation. I despise it," said Sherlock. "Total waste of time, and also, not relaxing at all."

"That's because you tried the wrong focus," Joan argued. "I know from the things you've said that you have spent decades loading your mental database with useful facts. Don't try to tell me you've never done your own forensic studies, you know too much about it."

"Yes, but Mummy made it clear those were not acceptable," said Sherlock.

"You mother isn't in North Carolina," Joan pointed out.

"I'll go pack," said Sherlock.

* * *

The next day ...


The body farm was named FOReSt partly because it was located in a patch of woods near the small mountain university. Birdsong filled the air and insects hummed in the flowers. Sun and shadow made soft patterns on the ground.

"Here we are," Joan said, pointing to a pair of small patches marked out with low plastic tape. "This is our observation spot, so we can put the lawn chairs here. The body will go over there." She unfolded the chairs.

"Body?" said Sherlock.

"Currently they deploy a body once per week in different conditions," said Joan. "They didn't get a human donation this week, so they're using a pig as a substitute. During our three-month stay, we should get to see a wide variety of bodies laid out, but we get priority position for this one."

"Interesting," Sherlock said, then shook his head as if trying to clear water from his ears. "Motor sound. Not quite sure if it's real or not."

"It's real," Joan confirmed. "A grad student is scheduled to bring the pig. We get to help stage the crime scene."

Soon a small tractor pulled up, towing a wagon behind it. A young man climbed off. "Hi, I'm Chet Ellis," he said. "Dr. Joan Watson and Mr. Sherlock Holmes, I gather?"

"Yes, thank you sharing your facility," said Joan. "What do you have for us?"

"Oh, you're gonna love this," Chet said, flipping open the plastic wrap in the wagon. "Pig Doe got out of the pen and someone hit him with a truck. So we're taking advantage of the blunt-force trauma to stage a murder. The professor had the farmer conk the late Mr. Doe on the head with an old sledge hammer, so we've also got a weapon to lay out."

Quickly they put on gloves and arranged the pig carcass under a tree.

"Who wants to play the suspect?" Chet said, offering the sledgehammer.

"I shall," said Sherlock, taking hold of it. "I dispatch my victim --" He mimed swinging at Pig Doe. "-- but I still feel quite enraged, so I hurl the weapon and storm away." An expert throw bounced the sledgehammer off the nearest tree, leaving a conspicuous dent, and depositing it next to the pig. Stomping away left clear impressions in the undergrowth and soil below it.

"Okay, great," said Chet. "I'm going to snap a few photographs to start with, and then you two can examine the body for a couple of minutes. As soon as any insects appear, though, we have to stand back in the observation square to avoid disturbing them."

Sherlock and Joan both set their stopwatches. Then they crouched down to poke at the body. "Multiple rib fractures," said Joan. "Possible cause of death from crushing the thoracic cavity, affecting the heart and lungs."

"And here," Sherlock said, pointing. "Dual head trauma, fractured skull exposing part of the brain. You can see where the farmer cleverly struck the head with the sledgehammer in almost exactly the same place as the truck must have, thus deepening the wound. In a genuine crime we might see these in the opposite order, attempting to conceal a murderous blow with a vehicular strike."

"Oh hey, let me get a closeup of that," said Chet, leaning over with the camera. Sherlock helpfully pointed out the two different, overlapping injuries.

"Certainly a fatal wound," Joan said. "The temple is a vulnerable spot."

"First fly," Chet called. "Step back to the observation area now."

"Lucilia sericata, also called the green bottle fly," said Sherlock. "Note the slow, bumbling approach indicating a female heavy with eggs."

"Bets on where she lands?" Chet said.

"The head injury," said Joan at the same time Sherlock said, "Snout."

"I'll take eyes," said Chet.

The fly landed on the snout.

"How did you do that?" Chet said, eyeing Sherlock.

"While a fly attracted to a fresh corpse can land anywhere, and most often at a wound or a natural opening, the pig's snout tends to be the most odiferous part of the head due to rooting action, thus especially attractive to flies which identify their food source by smell," Sherlock explained.

"Yes, he's always like this," Joan said fondly.

They settled into the observation area and watched the scene slowly come alive as the necrobiome developed. The second arrival, a blowfly, landed on the head wound. More flies soon arrived, along with a few other insects. A brown-and-white bird swooped through the swarm of flies.

"Eastern phoebe," Chet whispered.

Something crept through a patch of old, brown leaves. Joan watched, but couldn't pin it down.

"Wolf spider," said Sherlock. "Drawn, no doubt, by the prevalence of prey."

Joan inched her lawn chair a little farther from Pig Doe. Wolf spiders were fast, active, aggressive hunters. She didn't care to tangle with one.

A blue jay swooped down, thrashed the wolf spider against a rock, and swallowed it.

"Surprisingly tame birds you have here," Sherlock murmured.

"Nah, they're wild, they're just used to people sitting still for a long time," said Chet. "Don't try to eat outdoors on campus, though. The sparrows will steal French fries right out of your hand. Cheeky buggers."

"Duly noted," said Sherlock.

They sat and watched the scene unfold. It was a perfect mix of creepy and peaceful.

* * *

Three months later ...


"I must admit, this was an excellent idea you had," said Sherlock. "I feel much improved."

"No more headaches, sensory spikes, or other symptoms?" Joan said.

"Not in the last month, and only a few in the month before," said Sherlock. "I'm quite ready to return to active work."

"I'm happy to hear that," said Joan. "I hope the rest wasn't too boring."

"Not at all," said Sherlock. "I enjoyed this ... working vacation. Perhaps I'll even try it again, should we find ourselves between cases for some time. Certainly I learned a great deal about forensics and entomology. That should be useful in pinning down suspects."

"I enjoyed the birdwatching myself," said Joan.

"Yes, I could see that being useful if they're attracted to a swarm of insects around a dead body," said Sherlock. "Thank you for accompanying me on this trip. I'm sure it would have been much less successful without you. Or bearable."

"You know, I think it helped me too," said Joan. "Dealing with my father's death hasn't been easy -- well, nothing about my father has ever been easy -- and sitting in the woods gave me some valuable time to think. And feel."

"Excellent." Sherlock snapped his suitcase shut. "Shall we be off, then? I'm sure we'll have cases waiting for us at home."

"Of course," Joan said, picking up her own bag. "The game is afoot."

* * *

Notes:

Elementary introduces post-concussion syndrome in Season 6, and I wrote this after I watched the episode "Pushing Buttons." This is a very rare instance of showing realistic consequences of a head injury in storytelling.

(Messy medical details ahead.)
Post-concussion syndrome or post-traumatic brain injury syndrome is a very useful if controversial description of a cluster of problems that often follow head trauma. Multiple treatments and natural remedies have been proposed, with varying degrees of success. Creative change, nutrition, and nature therapy all show promise and work quite well for some sufferers. Nothing works for everyone, and some people don't get better.

Nature therapy activates the many benefits of being in the great outdoors. Conversely, nature deficit disorder can have serious consequences. So if you have a problem that is exacerbated by stress and technology, like PCS, then time in nature is an excellent remedy to try.

Everyone has a mental database of things they have learned. Smart people purposely load it with material they expect to use often. Eclectic people shovel in everything that catches their interest. Mind mapping and other memorization methods are some ways that people do this. Here's an example of how to load a mental database for law school students, which is related to Sherlock's work.

Meditation uses a wide variety of techniques to develop mindfulness. One common approach uses a visual focus such as a mandala. However, it has to be something that you find engaging. For Sherlock, a decomposing body makes a much better focus than a mandala. YMMV.

(Some of the following links are gross.)
A body farm researches how dead animals decay, often using a combination of human and nonhuman corpses. The Forensic Osteology Research Station (FOReSt) and Western Carolina Human Identification Laboratory (WCHIL) at Western Carolina University use their experiments to help solve crimes.

Body farms often use pigs for things like studying how bodies of different sizes decay. Watch a video of time-lapse decomposition.

Students can use experiments to explore forensic entomology.

The Green Bottle Fly (Lucilia sericata) and Blowfly (Calliphoridae family) commonly lay eggs on corpses.

The necrobiome is a miniature ecosystem that forms in and around a dead organism. It includes animal scavengers, insects, and so on. Watch a documentary video about it.

Birds include many insect eaters such as the Eastern Phoebe (Sayornis phoebe). They often gravitate to areas of high insect activity.

Spiders of North Carolina include Wolf Spiders such as the Tiger Wolf Spider (Tigrosa aspersa). They are active hunters and often quite pugnacious.


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Nonfiction written for Snowflake 2022:

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Date: 2022-01-11 08:22 pm (UTC)
cornerofmadness: (Default)
From: [personal profile] cornerofmadness
I adored this story.(I want to take my students to the body farm. No one wants to go sadly) Joan definitely found the right way for Sherlock to relax.

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Date: 2022-01-11 08:29 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] siberian_skys
I can't imagine why your students wouldn't take the opportunity. I've always wanted to go since I discovered it existed.

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Date: 2022-01-11 09:24 pm (UTC)
cornerofmadness: (Default)
From: [personal profile] cornerofmadness
Same here! It's like you want to be doctors, how can you not be fascinated? I took a group to the Bodies exhibit once in Columbus and they all sneaked out. When it came to our town not one showed up to my talk. Sigh

Re: O_O

Date: 2022-01-12 12:54 am (UTC)
cornerofmadness: (Default)
From: [personal profile] cornerofmadness
some of them have no idea what they're getting into (and don't makeit)

One of my nursing students is afraid of blood but informed me she was okay with it in child birth and she was going to be in with the new moms. I said you have NO idea where you'll be put to work in a hospital. It's not like it was 40 years ago. You tend to float. She refuses to believe me (I doubt she'll make it through training)


I really enjoyed that story

Re: O_O

Date: 2022-01-12 04:28 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cornerofmadness
I certainly thought I knew what I was getting into in med school and for the most part I did but I was way more into preparing than some of them but that was over 30 years ago. It's completely different now.

Trust me, most health care professionals wish hospitals were run by health care professionals and not business men/accountants because they don't understand what it needs

Re: O_O

Date: 2022-01-13 02:28 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cornerofmadness
None of this surprises me about psychiatry and health care.

And yes I do feel like the old woman rattling my cane talking about kids today but in this case it is true. I've only been teaching 16 years and recently as a sample test I gave one on the same material from my first five years here and the pass rate was less than 50%. We lost more than half the nursing students between last semester and this. It's a frightening time to be doing this job

Re: O_O

Date: 2022-01-12 06:59 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] kengr
Some day I need to write up "recommendations"/"preferences" for my body's disposal. A body farm would be nice. Even better if they'd take me en femme They probably don't get many trans bodies.

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Date: 2022-01-12 02:11 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] siberian_skys
I've always wanted to see the Bodies exhibit. My Mom and I singed up years ago to take a trip with the travel club in her neighborhood and the trop had to be canceled, because no one wanted to go. I find lack of scientific interest to be part of what's wrong with this country and it explains so much. Now I'm trying to figure ut how your medical students plan to be doctors if they skip anatomy.

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Date: 2022-01-12 04:15 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cornerofmadness
I'm with you on this. Honestly we're seeing this in ever degree. They want the degree without doing the work

Re: Yes ...

Date: 2022-01-12 02:51 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cornerofmadness
Thanks. It wasn't what I planned but after the injury ended my surgical career it seemed like a good fit.

Re: Yes ...

Date: 2022-01-13 02:18 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cornerofmadness
Thanks. And I'm lucky I could do this one online last year after that injury did me in for the year

Re: Yes ...

Date: 2022-01-12 02:50 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cornerofmadness
Thanks. It was on the snowflake mod collection.

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Date: 2022-01-12 12:10 pm (UTC)
siberian_skys: (Default)
From: [personal profile] siberian_skys
That is just really sad. I wish I were surprised.

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Date: 2022-01-12 02:38 pm (UTC)
cornerofmadness: (Default)
From: [personal profile] cornerofmadness
same here

Re: Thank you!

Date: 2022-01-11 09:23 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cornerofmadness
I teach anatomy and physiology at a small uni so I get a mix of pre-meds, PTs and those interested in forensics (but not enough of those sadly) I thought they might enjoy the one in TN which isn't that far from us, easily a weekender.

I agree. Not every relaxation method is going to work for everyone. (this is the reason I don't vacation with my brother and his wife, they're into beaches and doing nothing and I'd be bored in 10 minutes)

Re: Thank you!

Date: 2022-01-12 12:43 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cornerofmadness
I wanted to offer it but our art dept wasn't interested. Oh well. I'm overworked as is.

You and I would be up the beach doing the same thing

Re: Thank you!

Date: 2022-01-12 02:25 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cornerofmadness
snort

Re: Thank you!

Date: 2022-01-12 02:24 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cornerofmadness
they cut the art dept to the bone and I do research in the summer unfortunately

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Date: 2022-01-11 08:27 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] siberian_skys
I didn't know you wrote Elementary. Very cool. I can't remember since I saw either an episode or read a fic. You did a great job, of course, but it made me nostalgic. :-)

Re: Thoughts

Date: 2022-01-12 02:16 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] siberian_skys
I think you picked very well. :-)

I need to finish editing and get my piece finished for Snowflake.

Re: Thoughts

Date: 2022-01-12 12:13 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] siberian_skys
I finally got mine up this morning. I just can't seem to get it together. I've only looked at yours so far.

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Date: 2022-01-12 02:38 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] senmut
Very enjoyable.

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Date: 2022-01-12 08:40 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] catness
This is so weird and interesting! And the extensive notes add a whole new dimension. I had no idea about body farms. I don't watch Elementary (tried a few times, but somehow it just doesn't click), but I know the setting, more-or-less.

LOL, I have the same problem with meditation as your Sherlock. (Tried the guided meditation and mandalas too.) I wonder if watching corpses would be more relaxing :P but the stench, ugh...

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Date: 2022-01-13 03:21 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] razielim
THIS IS DELIGHTFUL! I love everything about this! I'm going to check out those PCS more thoroughly links later too. I pretty much established my own protocol for recovery because (browsing for info was hard and) most info was just about rest. My protocol involved learning to play a musical instrument, and radically overcoming several lifelong patterns of thinking/behaving by assuming this was the perfect, and hopefully once-in-a-lifetime, chance to change my entire brain wholesale. All of that got me through the rough year when I couldn't paint or write at all, but I do still have some speech, writing, and memory problems, so I'm really excited to see some of the stuff mentioned in the resources.

Also, I didn't know Elementary ended up dealing with PCS! I suppose I must have just missed it because iirc it was the network scheduling it at odd time-slots during the sixth season that shook me off the train. Maybe I'll finally revisit that wonderful show.

And lastly but not leastly, loved the fic. You really nailed the cadences of their speech patterns and I felt like I was indeed watching a coda or short episode. The information-density of what they were up to also contributed to the immersion. Delightful.

Thank you for writing and sharing!!

Re: Thank you!

Date: 2022-01-16 12:18 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] razielim
Ironically, funny that you mention that, I've also twisted my ankle recently and also didn't encounter any hints online that I should eventually start active recovery, or hear anything about it from my doctor friend who knew I'd badly hurt it. It was only when I mentioned it to someone who is an active athlete and coach that he immediately shook me and gave me a breakdown on what I should be doing ASAP to aid long-term mobility. And it makes perfect sense, knowing what I know about recovery in other spheres, but that cross-domain blindness will get you every time if you're not paying attention.

Thanks for all the additional info!

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