Feedback on "Saudades"

[ysabetwordsmith]

I've posted the last part of the poem "Saudades." It's gotten fewer responses than other stuff I've posted in this series, and more mixed. I'd like to pin down the differences ...

Poll #14931 Feedback on Saudades

Open to: Registered Users, detailed results viewable to: All, participants: 20

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With 1 being dislike and 10 being like, how much did you enjoy "Saudades"?

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Mean: 7.24 Median: 7 Std. Dev 2.10

1		0 (0.0%)
2		1 (5.9%)
3		0 (0.0%)
4		1 (5.9%)
5		1 (5.9%)
6		1 (5.9%)
7		6 (35.3%)
8		2 (11.8%)
9		2 (11.8%)
10		3 (17.6%)

What did you like about this poem?

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Bruce-and-Hulk are favorite characters. I'll read almost anything about them.
7 (41.2%)

Emotional whump! YAY! Hit them again.
5 (29.4%)

I like the backstory.
9 (52.9%)

I like the inside perspective of Bruce-and-Hulk.
11 (64.7%)

I like poetry.
8 (47.1%)

I like your writing and read most/all of it.
11 (64.7%)

Something else.
2 (11.8%)

What did you dislike about this poem?

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I'm not a big fan of Bruce-and-Hulk.
0 (0.0%)

Too dark! Too dark! Turn up the lights.
3 (20.0%)

Poetry ... meh. I prefer fiction.
8 (53.3%)

Backstory doesn't grab me.
0 (0.0%)

Something else.
6 (40.0%)

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

I loved the topic I just couldn't get into the poetry

Okay...

[ysabetwordsmith]

Thanks for letting me know.