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The Poetry Fishbowl is now CLOSED. Thank you for your time and enthusiasm.

Starting now, the Poetry Fishbowl is open!  Today's theme is "love."  I will be checking this page periodically throughout the day. When people make suggestions, I'll pick some and weave them together into a poem ... and then another ... and so on. I'm hoping to get a lot of ideas and a lot of poems.

Click to read the linkback poem "Spirit of Truth" (One God's Story of Mid-Life Crisis, 19 verses).


What Is a Poetry Fishbowl?

Writing is usually considered a solitary pursuit. One exception to this is a fascinating exercise called a "fishbowl." This has various forms, but all of them basically involve some kind of writing in public, usually with interaction between author and audience. A famous example is Harlan Ellison's series of "stories under glass" in which he sits in a bookstore window and writes a new story based on an idea that someone gives him. Writing classes sometimes include a version where students watch each other write, often with students calling out suggestions which are chalked up on the blackboard for those writing to use as inspiration.

In this online version of a Poetry Fishbowl, I begin by setting a theme; today's theme is "love." I invite people to suggest characters, settings, and other things relating to that theme. Then I use those prompts as inspiration for writing poems.


Cyberfunded Creativity

I'm practicing cyberfunded creativity. If you enjoy what I'm doing and want to see more of it, please feed the Bard. The following options are currently available:

1) Sponsor the Fishbowl -- Here is a PayPal button for donations. There is no specific requirement, but $1 is the minimum recommended size for PayPal transactions since they take a cut from every one. You can also donate via check or money order sent by postal mail. If you make a donation and tell me about it, I promise to use one of your prompts. Anonymous donations are perfectly welcome, just won't get that perk. General donations will be tallied, and at the end of the fishbowl I’ll post a list of eligible poems based on the total funding; then the audience can vote on which they want to see posted.







2) Swim, Fishie, Swim! -- A feature in conjunction with fishbowl sponsorship is this progress meter showing the amount donated.  There are multiple perks, the top one being a half-price poetry sale on one series when donations reach $300.



3) Buy It Now! -- Gakked from various e-auction sites, this feature allows you to sponsor a specific poem. If you don't want to wait for some editor to buy and publish my poem so you can read it, well, now you don't have to. Sponsoring a poem means that I will immediately post it on my blog for everyone to see, with the name of the sponsor (or another dedicate) if you wish; plus you get a nonexclusive publication right, so you can post it on your own blog or elsewhere as long as you keep the credits intact. You'll need to tell me the title of the poem you want to sponsor. I'm basing the prices on length, and they're comparable to what I typically make selling poetry to magazines (semi-pro rates according to Duotrope's Digest).

0-10 lines: $5
11-25 lines: $10
26-40 lines: $15
41-60 lines: $20
Poems over 60 lines, or with very intricate structure, fall into custom pricing.

4) Commission a scrapbook page. I can render a chosen poem in hardcopy format, on colorful paper, using archival materials for background and any embellishments. This will be suitable for framing or for adding to a scrapbook. Commission details are here.  See latest photos of sample scrapbooked poems: "Sample Scrapbooked Poems 1-24-11"

5) Spread the word. Echo or link to this post on your LiveJournal, other blog, Twitter, Facebook, Digg, StumbleUpon, Tumblr, or any other social network.  Useful Twitter hashtags include #poetryfishbowl, #promptcall, and #crowdfunding.  Encourage people to come here and participate in the fishbowl.  If you have room for it, including your own prompt will give your readers an idea of what the prompts should look like; ideally, update later to include the thumbnail of the poem I write, and a link to the poem if it gets published.  If there is at least one new prompter or donor, I will post an extra freebie poem.

Linkback perk: I have a spare series poem available, and each linkback will reveal a verse of the poem.  One person can do multiple links if they're on different services, like Dreamwidth or Twitter, rather than all on LiveJournal.  Comment with a link to where you posted. "Spirit of Truth" belongs to the series One God's Story of Mid-Life Crisis and has 19 verses.


Additional Notes

1) I customarily post replies to prompt posts telling people which of their prompts I'm using, with a brief description of the resulting poem(s). If you want to know what's available, watch for those "thumbnails."

2) You don't have to pay me to see a poem based on a prompt that you gave me. I try to send copies of poems to people, mostly using the LJ message function.  (Anonymous prompters will miss this perk unless you give me your eddress.)  These are for-your-eyes-only, though, not for sharing.

3) Sponsors of the Poetry Fishbowl in general, or of specific poems, will gain access to an extra post in appreciation of their generosity.  While you're on the Donors list, you can view all of the custom-locked posts in that category.  Click the "donors" tag to read the archive of those.  I've also posted a list of other donor perks there.  I customarily leave donor names on the list for two months, so you'll get to see the perk-post from this month and next.

4) After the Poetry Fishbowl concludes, I will post a list of unsold poems and their prices, to make it easier for folks to see what they might want to sponsor.

5) If donations total $100 by Friday evening then you get a free $15 poem; $150 gets you a free $20 poem; and $200 gets you a free epic, posted after the Poetry Fishbowl.  These will usually be series poems if I have them; otherwise I may offer non-series poems or series poems in a different size.  If donations reach $250, you get one step toward a bonus fishbowl; three of these activates the perk, and they don't have to be three months in a row.  Everyone will get to vote on which series, and give prompts during the extra fishbowl, although it may be a half-day rather than a whole day.  If donations reach $300, there will be a half-price sale in one series to be selected in an audience poll.


Feed the Fish!
Now's your chance to participate in the creative process by posting ideas for me to write about. Today's theme is "love."  I'll be soliciting ideas for lovers, spice, zucchini, siblings, parents and children, other loving relationships, falling in love, falling out of love, making up, breaking up, searching for someone special, plot twists, romantic restaurants, balconies, beaches, living rooms, bedrooms, other places where people express love, romance around the world, courting gifts, romantic customs, our song, unusual romantic configurations, intimate promises, nonsexual forms of intimacy or love, and poetic forms in particular. But anything is welcome, really. If you manage to recommend a form that I don't recognize, I will probably pounce on it and ask you for its rules. I do have Lewis Turco's The New Book of Forms which covers most common and many obscure forms.

I'll post at least one of the fishbowl poems here so you-all can enjoy it. (Remember, you get an extra freebie poem if someone new posts a prompt or makes a donation, and additional perks at $100-$300 in donations.  Linkbacks reveal verses of "Spirit of Truth.") The rest of the poems will go into my archive for magazine submission.

(no subject)

Date: 2014-02-04 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ellenmillion.livejournal.com
Lorn without the love

A really bad matchmaker

(And I really, really, REALLY want to know what happened between Fala and Dareg to break them up...)

Poem

Date: 2014-02-05 10:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
From your second prompt I got "Mismatchmakers." There are many goddesses of love, and some of them oversee trouble. When they get together, it gets even worse. This poem is written in unrhymed tercets.

30 lines, Buy It Now = $15

Poem

Date: 2014-02-04 07:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
Based on a backchannel prompt from Anthony Barrette, I got the free-verse poem "No-Good Lovers," which uses the extended metaphor of a toxic relationship to explore how people interact with money.

35 lines, Buy It Now = $15

(no subject)

Date: 2014-02-04 07:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janetmiles.livejournal.com
Live, love, laugh - if you can't laugh together, is it really love?

Rose is a rose is eros

puppy piles

Poem

Date: 2014-02-05 01:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
See below "The Feast of Saint Valentine" for a puppy pile.

Poem

Date: 2014-02-06 01:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
For love and laughter, see below "As One of Your Countrymen."

Poem

Date: 2014-02-06 04:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
More love and laughter appear in "Waiting Hand and Foot," thumbnailed below.

(no subject)

Date: 2014-02-04 08:01 pm (UTC)
ext_3294: Tux (Default)
From: [identity profile] technoshaman.livejournal.com
Dale and Kelly being silly. Visual puns?

Valentine's day in Waxahatchie has *gotta* be interesting. So many ways to express.

Victor and Igor? Perhaps work through a misunderstanding ...

Poem

Date: 2014-02-05 01:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
The prompt about Victor and Igor brought up that conversation they've been NOT having about employment vs. family relationships. It did not go well. Fortunately they had friends in the village to help them through the messy aftermath. Also more awesome local color emerged; I'm really falling in love with this setting. "The Feast of Saint Valentine" is written in free verse.

360 lines, Buy It Now = $180

Poem

Date: 2014-02-06 04:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
From your Valentine's Day prompt came the free-verse poem "Waiting Hand and Foot," as Quinn and Ash take care of each other by exchanging massage. Also there is French comfort food.

72 lines, Buy It Now = $36

Poem

Date: 2014-02-07 12:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
Your prompt about Dale and Kelly led to "Pussy Willows and Tiger Lilies." This is a free-verse Valentine's Day poem with a light tone.

27 lines, Buy It Now = $15

Poem

Date: 2014-02-04 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
A Dreamwidth prompt inspired the free-verse poem "Valor's Widow." A superhero's wife chooses to sacrifice him to save a city.

46 lines, Buy It Now = $20

(no subject)

Date: 2014-02-04 08:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aldersprig.livejournal.com
Learning what love is.

It's only love if... / it's not love if...

"Love shouldn't hurt."

Poem

Date: 2014-02-05 01:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
Your first and third prompts appear in "The Feast of Saint Valentine," thumbnailed above.

(no subject)

Date: 2014-02-04 08:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aldersprig.livejournal.com
Love between different species.

Love between strangers.

When parts of a self fall in love.

Poem

Date: 2014-02-06 06:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
Your strangers prompt inspired the poem "Lawless, Winged, and Unconfined." Scott and the incubus share a connection that isn't a chain, which is new and a bit confusing, but they gradually get used to it.

74 original lines, Buy It Now = $37

(no subject)

Date: 2014-02-04 08:59 pm (UTC)
kelkyag: notched triangle signature mark in light blue on yellow (Default)
From: [personal profile] kelkyag
Sibling love: the kids of monster house

Melinda and the Bogeyman.

The monster under the bed and the girl who gave him his bear.

What love anchors the closet monster to reality? (Or perhaps that's not how closet monsters operate, but the closet monster seems similar in genre to the monster under the bed.)

Poem

Date: 2014-02-05 04:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
Your prompt about Melinda and the bogeyman led to the free-verse poem "Unexpected Affections." They're actually two points of a triad, the third being the son of the house. This poem is about childhood romance and friendship.

41 lines, Buy It Now = $20

Linkback Poem

Date: 2014-02-04 09:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
Read the linkback perk "Spirit of Truth."

(no subject)

Date: 2014-02-04 09:34 pm (UTC)
zeeth_kyrah: A glowing white and blue anthropomorphic horse stands before a pink and blue sky. (Default)
From: [personal profile] zeeth_kyrah
How do Nib and Brod deal with relationship troubles?

The movie Frozen shows that True Love can be from familitas, not just eros. Perhaps an example or two of True Love from the other Greek loves?

Poem

Date: 2014-02-05 07:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
Your true love prompt inspired the free-verse poem "The Love of Brothers." It uses philia as a base, and it takes place in ancient Greece, featuring a queerplatonic relationship between Ariston and Sophus, two apprentices of Archimedes.

80 lines, Buy It Now = $40

(no subject)

Date: 2014-02-04 09:45 pm (UTC)
ext_74: Baron Samadai in cat form (Default)
From: [identity profile] siliconshaman.livejournal.com
An unlikely kind of love...

The saying is that opposites attract, but what if it was taken literally?

Maybe the Evil SuperVillain keeps kidnapping the Plucky Girl because he loves her? [or perhaps he really loves the Stalwart Super Hero, and this is how he gets his attention.]

For that matter, how does a supervillain find love? [or is that why his trusty hench-person sticks around?]

Love in The Lucuna has to be difficult, even meeting someone has got to be awkward. [but then, that's what comms are for.]

Poem

Date: 2014-02-05 01:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
See "The Feast of Saint Valentine" for unlikely love, thumbnailed above.

Poem

Date: 2014-02-05 09:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
Your prompt about difficult love inspired the free-verse poem "Aren't You Already There?" It explores love and long-distance relationships in the Lacuna, and the challenges people face.

59 lines, Buy It Now = $20

Poem

Date: 2014-02-08 03:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
Your supervillain prompts inspired the free-verse poem "Pulling Pigtails." I also incorporated part of your nomenclature. There are three sets of love/hate interests spanning junior high, high school, and college ages; and varying orientations. People show affection in different ways, some more functional than others.

83 lines, Buy It Now = $41.50

(no subject)

Date: 2014-02-04 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-vulture.livejournal.com
I have a stuffed puppy I once bought as a Valentine's day gift, but my then girlfriend broke up with me a little under two weeks before. Instead of being a gift of joy, it wound up being the thing I curled up with night in sorrow, after first detaching the little stuffed heart that said "Be mine."

Why is it hard for many to conceive of love without sexual desire, but, understand lust without love quite readily?

Predicting your future love by twisting the stem of an apple.

Putting up with each other's imperfections.
Edited Date: 2014-02-04 10:32 pm (UTC)

Poem

Date: 2014-02-05 01:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
For imperfections, see above "The Feast of Saint Valentine."

Poem

Date: 2014-02-05 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
From your Valentine prompt came the free-verse poem "The Love Puppy." Sometimes we don't wind up with the love we want, but the love we need.

72 lines, Buy It Now = $36

Re: Poem

Date: 2014-02-05 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-vulture.livejournal.com
I want sponsor this, but I'll have to wait until next Friday (ironically, Valentine's Day), when I get paid. Can you hold on to that for me until then, pretty please? *puppy dog eyes*

Re: Poem

Date: 2014-02-05 09:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
Awesome. I have logged this poem as reserved for your attention on 2/14/14. It will make a great release then, as it is in fact a Valentine's Day poem.

Poem

Date: 2014-02-06 06:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
For love without sex, see "Lawless, Winged, and Unconfined" thumbnailed above.

Re: Two links = 1 prompt

Date: 2014-02-05 03:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
From this I got "Let Me Count the Days," today's freebie.

(no subject)

Date: 2014-02-05 01:26 am (UTC)
rowyn: (cute)
From: [personal profile] rowyn
I wasn't going to use this, but it keeps coming back to me: I want to see Shaeth in love. n_n

Barring that: Fiorenza and the witch's son on an outing!

Poem

Date: 2014-02-05 09:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
Your prompt about Shaeth led to the poem "Unfamiliar Feelings." He feels love, but he doesn't understand it. None of it really fits with his previous experiences, and he doesn't know what to do about that.

84 lines, Buy It Now = $42

Poem

Date: 2014-02-08 04:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
The prompt about Fiorenza inspired the poem "A Picnic in the Hills." Fiorenza and Giacinto go out and have a picnic while watching the local fairies. This poem is written in unrhymed tercets.

27 lines, Buy It Now = $15

(no subject)

Date: 2014-02-05 02:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lb-lee.livejournal.com
Either love for the folks in Feet of Clay, or in Damask's system! Also, I am sponsoring Valor's Widow.

--Rogan

W00T!

Date: 2014-02-05 03:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
Thank you for the sponsorship. I have just posted "Valor's Widow."

I'll get to your prompt(s) as I can.

Poem

Date: 2014-02-06 01:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
From the Clay of Life series comes the free-verse poem "As One of Your Countrymen." It uses Hebrew vocabulary about love and charity to explore the relationship between Yossele the golem and Menachem the blacksmith, along with others they meet while traveling.

113 lines, Buy It Now = $56.50

Poem

Date: 2014-02-08 07:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
The prompt about Damask inspired the free-verse poem "Drawing Me Out." It's a single-person perspective (which is new for Damask) that shows Clement interacting with Dace. Dace is being friendly and a little shy; Clement is being friendly and a LOT shy, leaping to some assumptions without really much evidence one way or another.

81 lines, Buy It Now = $40.50

Poem

Date: 2014-02-05 02:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
A Dreamwidth prompt about God expanded into the free-verse poem "The Children Made Manifest." It weaves together a bunch of Bible verses about love and faith, along with examples from the Fledgling Grace setting.

42 original lines, Buy It Now = $20

(no subject)

Date: 2014-02-05 02:34 am (UTC)
rix_scaedu: (Default)
From: [personal profile] rix_scaedu
Love unexpected.

Love unwanted.

Love neglected.

Love alone.

Poem

Date: 2014-02-05 04:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
The concept of "love unexpected" appears in "The Feast of Saint Valentine" and "Unexpected Affections," both thumbnailed above.

Poem

Date: 2014-02-06 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
For love unexpected, see "Lawless, Winged, and Unconfined" thumbnailed above.

Poem

Date: 2014-02-05 08:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
From a Dreamwidth prompt I got the free-verse poem "Always Like Itself," which belongs to the series Tripping into the Future. Love is the one thing that not even entropy can touch.

44 lines, Buy It Now = $20

Done for the night!

Date: 2014-02-05 10:32 am (UTC)

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