>> I stumbled on Love is for children a few months ago on AO3 I've been working my way through the series since then. I decided to to reread the series and work on commenting while I'm at it. <<
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>> This first page got me hooked quickly The problem with teambuilding, Phil mused, was that you couldn't do it without a team. had me interested <<
That's good to hear.
>> the third paragraph confirmed I wanted to keep reading coming from a family where everyone is brilliant in a crisis but where everyone tends to suffer long after once the pressure is off this rang true to the sort of issues I'd expect this sort of group to have functioning fine to outsiders but all screaming on the inside. <<
Oh yeah, the crisis-to-crisis lifestyle. It really suits the way the movies are written but it's a lousy way to live. People burn out. It's no wonder Tony was so fried in Iron Man 3 even though that one's not canon for this series. I did borrow some bits from it. The Avengers absolutely need time to relax and heal from the damage, or they will be in no condition to fight when Earth needs them again. Nobody can stay on call 24/7.
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Re: de-lurking
Date: 2014-08-22 03:49 am (UTC)Yay! Feedback is candy.
>> This first page got me hooked quickly The problem with teambuilding, Phil mused, was that you couldn't do it without a team. had me interested <<
That's good to hear.
>> the third paragraph confirmed I wanted to keep reading coming from a family where everyone is brilliant in a crisis but where everyone tends to suffer long after once the pressure is off this rang true to the sort of issues I'd expect this sort of group to have functioning fine to outsiders but all screaming on the inside. <<
Oh yeah, the crisis-to-crisis lifestyle. It really suits the way the movies are written but it's a lousy way to live. People burn out. It's no wonder Tony was so fried in Iron Man 3 even though that one's not canon for this series. I did borrow some bits from it. The Avengers absolutely need time to relax and heal from the damage, or they will be in no condition to fight when Earth needs them again. Nobody can stay on call 24/7.