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Starting now, the Poetry Fishbowl is open! I will be checking this page periodically throughout the day. When people make suggestions, I'll pick some and weave them together into a poem ... and then another ... and so on. I'm hoping to get a lot of ideas and a lot of poems.

In this online version of a Poetry Fishbowl, I begin by setting a theme; today's theme is sword & sorcery. I invite people to suggest characters, settings, and other things relating to that theme. Then I use those prompts as inspiration for writing poems.

Today's donation goal is $100. We're mostly using the fishbowl funds to buy groceries, but if enough comes in, this month I get a bit for plant shopping. That starts at $50 and goes up a little more at $100, so there's the goal. Fresh herbs for cooking, mmm...



What Is a Poetry Fishbowl?

Writing is usually considered a solitary pursuit. One exception to this is a fascinating exercise called a "fishbowl." This has various forms, but all of them basically involve some kind of writing in public, usually with interaction between author and audience. A famous example is Harlan Ellison's series of "stories under glass" in which he sits in a bookstore window and writes a new story based on an idea that someone gives him. Writing classes sometimes include a version where students watch each other write, often with students calling out suggestions which are chalked up on the blackboard for those writing to use as inspiration.


Cyberfunded Creativity

I'm practicing cyberfunded creativity. If you enjoy what I'm doing and want to see more of it, please feed the Bard. The following options are currently available:

1) Sponsor the Fishbowl -- Here is a PayPal button for donations. There is no specific requirement, but $1 is the minimum recommended size for PayPal transactions since they take a cut from every one. You can also donate via check or money order sent by postal mail. If you make a donation and tell me about it, I promise to use one of your prompts. Anonymous donations are perfectly welcome, just won't get that perk. General donations will be tallied, and at the end of the fishbowl I’ll post a list of eligible poems based on the total funding; then the audience can vote on which they want to see posted.






2) Buy It Now! -- Gakked from various e-auction sites, this feature allows you to sponsor a specific poem. If you don't want to wait for some editor to buy and publish my poem so you can read it, well, now you don't have to. Sponsoring a poem means that I will immediately post it on my blog for everyone to see, with the name of the sponsor (or another dedicate) if you wish; plus you get a nonexclusive publication right, so you can post it on your own blog or elsewhere as long as you keep the credits intact. You'll need to tell me the title of the poem you want to sponsor. I'm basing the prices on length, and they're comparable to what I typically make selling poetry to magazines (semi-pro rates according to Duotrope's Digest).

0-10 lines: $5
11-25 lines: $10
26-40 lines: $15
41-60 lines: $20
Poems over 60 lines, or with very intricate structure, fall into custom pricing.

3) Matching donations. If you crave a particular poem but can't afford the whole thing yourself, you can team up with someone else to sponsor it. Matching donations are also allowed for the general fund.

4) Commission a scrapbook page. I can render a chosen poem in hardcopy format, on colorful paper, using archival materials for background and any embellishments. This will be suitable for framing or for adding to a scrapbook. Details are here.

5) Spread the word! Post about the Poetry Fishbowl on your blog and link to it. Tell your friends about it and encourage them to participate. Rate my poetry on Poetry Blog Rankings so it will attract more attention.
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Additional Notes

1) I customarily post replies to prompt posts telling people which of their prompts I'm using, with a brief description of the resulting poem(s). If you want to know what's available, watch for those.

2) You don't have to pay me to see a poem based on a prompt that you gave me. I try to send copies of poems to people through LJ's private-message function. If you're not logged in but you want to see the poem inspired by your prompt, give me your eddress; I recommend using {at} and {dot} to discourage spammers. These are for-your-eyes-only, though, not for sharing.

3) Sponsors of the Poetry Fishbowl in general, or of specific poems, will gain access to an extra post in appreciation of their generosity.


Feed the Fish!
Now's your chance to participate in the creative process by posting ideas for me to write about. Today's theme is sword & sorcery. I am especially looking for:

  • heroes and heras

  • magical characters

  • adventures

  • strange swords

  • strange things that can happen to swords

  • magical artifacts

  • classic fantasy locations

  • unusual fantasy locations

  • reversals of tropes you think are stupid

  • and poetic forms


  • If you manage to recommend a form that I don't recognize, I will probably pounce on it and ask you for its rules. I do have the first edition of Lewis Turco's The Book of Forms which covers most common and many obscure forms.

    I'll post at least one of the fishbowl poems here so you-all can enjoy it. The rest will go into my archive for magazine submission.

    (no subject)

    Date: 2009-04-07 05:20 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] moosl.livejournal.com
    This time, the prompts come entirely from my Flickr account:

    Dragontina

    Knife juggler

    Crown

    Helm

    Shy elf

    Chain mail foot pawsoldier

    Evil eye gnome

    Poem

    Date: 2009-04-08 04:39 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
    From this I got a story told in fleeting glimpses, like the dancer seen through swirling flames. "Dragonspawn" is about a dragon's daughter making her way through the human world. It's written in verses of five lines, rhymed aabba.

    15 lines, Buy It Now = $10

    Poem

    Date: 2009-04-07 09:36 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
    I really liked the image of the steel helm reflecting the green forest. That got me thinking about legends of the Green Man and the Huntsman, which I combined with [livejournal.com profile] wyld_dandelyonodd ingredients that go into those things. The result is "The Huntsman's Helm," a free verse poem about how the Helm and the Huntsman were made, and from what, and what for.

    30 lines, Buy It Now = $15

    One last time...

    Date: 2009-04-08 07:47 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
    The pawsoldier seemed to be saying something with that look. It got me to thinking about military history and racial segregation. What would have happened if, in exploring the Earth, humans had found another species? How would humans formerly on the bottom of the heap respond to getting bumped up a rung?

    "Pawsoldiers" is told by a black man who, remembering his own slave days, gradually gets more and more upset by the way the dogboys are treated. This is a ballad, like many of the old plantation songs, and its vocabulary matches the mood of the time.

    56 lines, Buy It Now = $28

    Poem

    Date: 2009-04-07 09:58 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
    From this I got "Beowulf's Legacy," a heavily alliterated ballad about how everything fades away in time -- except for a hero's deeds.

    16 lines, Buy It Now = $10

    (no subject)

    Date: 2009-04-07 05:29 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] wyld-dandelyon.livejournal.com
    People have to make the magic wands and swords, seven-league boots, and so forth. How about a poem about the crafters?

    Also, what if it takes special materials to make special items?

    Poem

    Date: 2009-04-07 06:14 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
    I started with the idea of special materials and their crafter. From this I got the rather disturbing free verse poem "The Swordsmith's Secret" about a sentient sword being forged. Think about it.

    24 lines, Buy It Now = $10

    Second Poem

    Date: 2009-04-07 06:16 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
    And immediately after the first one, I rolled into a second, this one a rondeau called "It Takes an Old Man," which explores the idea that sometimes a magical artifact doesn't require special materials, but rather a special kind of crafter. So what does it take to create seven-league boots ... and why?

    15 lines, Buy It Now = $10

    (no subject)

    Date: 2009-04-07 05:36 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] haikujaguar.livejournal.com
    You know how Sword & Sorcery often has odd couples?

    I want the same thing, but with three people!

    O_o

    Date: 2009-04-08 06:33 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
    Okay ... a very odd trio indeed. Meet:

    Druga – a female Dwarf, masculine in bearing; a fighter
    Elan – a male Elf, feminine in bearing; a bard
    Hope – a human, neuter in bearing; a priest

    They met at a Hiring Hall as novice heroes and grew fond of each other. They did great at the heroing; the personal life proved a little more challenging. I did eventually manage to clean up what Druga said during the lovers' spat into something you might actually be willing to read. And they do get to live happily ever after.

    The poem is written in -- what else? -- rhymed trios (aaa, bbb...)

    87 lines, Buy It Now = $43.50

    (no subject)

    Date: 2009-04-07 05:43 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] janetmiles.livejournal.com
    How about someone who decides that s/he wants to be evil, but can't quite manage it? That kind of sucks as a prompt, though, so feel free to disregard it completely.

    *laugh*

    Date: 2009-04-08 12:50 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
    Actually, this sounded like great fun to me. It turned into a kind of dark comedy of errors, about two henchmen of an evil wizard: a young man and a troll. And thanks to [livejournal.com profile] minor_architect, the poem also involves a ridiculously big sword with what has to be a rather tolerant attitude toward bearers, considering what-all happens. "The Henchmen's Hitch" is free verse, a blend of imagery and dialogue.

    106 lines, Buy It Now = $53

    (no subject)

    Date: 2009-04-07 05:50 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] kadiera.livejournal.com
    Girls who want to fight instead of staying home and being "good" girls.

    (no subject)

    Date: 2009-04-07 05:58 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] haikujaguar.livejournal.com
    Oooh, and girls who are angry because they want to be rescued princesses, but all the princes are like, "Go rescue yourself," and the other princesses are like, "You suck, you're too submissive!"

    *gasp* *pant* *wheeze*

    Date: 2009-04-07 07:29 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
    The fighting girls are in here, and the men who want girls to rescue themselves (or the men). The princess is in here, along with the true knight. Plus the crown from [livejournal.com profile] moosl's comment above.

    And the benighted thing is two poems together, half and half. If this were a musical, the leading lady would be singing "Where Have All the Heroes Gone?" on stage left while the leading man simultaneously sang "Different Gifts" on stage right. The result is a two-part, couplet-rhymed, densely imaged paean to womanhood and manhood a la very classic fairy tales from the perspective of two people born just a little too late who are nevertheless determined to make things come out right in the end.

    64 lines, Buy It Now = $64 because this was SO enough work to need a dollar a line

    needlunchnao, ktnxby

    Poem

    Date: 2009-04-08 02:56 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
    This time I wrote a fierce vindication of warrior women and what they can accomplish. "Whistling Girls and Crowing Hens" is a ballad that turns an old saying on its head. Whee!

    36 lines, Buy It Now = $15

    Poem

    Date: 2009-04-08 04:09 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
    After "Whistling Girls and Crowing Hens," I decided to explore another phrase for an unfeminine girl. "A Doe in Velvet" is a long ballad about an elven girl betrothed to the King, and what she does when she discovers her true self. Where the earlier one was loud, this one is quiet, but no less powerful.

    72 lines, Buy It Now = $36

    (no subject)

    Date: 2009-04-07 06:23 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] minor-architect.livejournal.com
    I've run across so many fantasy stories in which the hero obtains a magical sword that is meant just for him or her, because that person is the only one good or pure enough to wield it. How about a poem where the mighty weapon is given to the person who is most likely to redeem themselves?

    (I was also going to offer a prompt about the ridiculous size of Japanese fantasy swords - the weapons in the game Final Fantasy VII are a prime example of this - but I couldn't find a decent online image to illustrate my point!)

    (no subject)

    Date: 2009-04-07 06:52 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] haikujaguar.livejournal.com
    Oooh! These are both excellent!

    (no subject)

    Date: 2009-04-07 07:05 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] minor-architect.livejournal.com
    *blush* Thank you! :)

    Poem

    Date: 2009-04-07 09:05 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
    I loved the idea of a sword intended to redeem someone -- not a sword for a hero, but a sword for making a hero out of a villain. That first meeting would be an intimate, vulnerable moment, so I combined this with [livejournal.com profile] jolantru's request for a sword's point of view. This is free verse, but it has a kind of cadence to it; if you pay attention, you can catch the subtle little spell of encouragement the sword is casting with its words.

    74 lines, Buy It Now = custom pricing

    (no subject)

    Date: 2009-04-07 10:36 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] minor-architect.livejournal.com
    Ooo, that sounds really good.

    Custom pricing, huh? *chews on fingernail*

    How much?

    (no subject)

    Date: 2009-04-07 11:34 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
    This one would be $37.

    I'm getting the hang of custom pricing the longer pieces based on how much work they are. Usually they're $.50/line but really challenging pieces sometimes go up to $1.00/line. I should just start figuring these and printing the prices.

    The epics take a lot out of me ... I'm not surprised I've gotten several of them today, though, given the topic. And they've been good heroic poems, revisiting some favorite tropes in new ways.

    (no subject)

    Date: 2009-04-08 12:29 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] minor-architect.livejournal.com
    Yay, this I can afford! :)

    I'll send my payment in the usual manner. Can't wait to read it!

    (And I hope you reach your $100 goal for this month. Fresh herbs are a great investment. I need to buy more rosemary and basil plants, myself!)

    Yay! Yay!

    Date: 2009-04-08 12:56 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
    Thanks everso. I will get "Raising the Hero" posted shortly. I'm so glad someone bought one of the epics so everyone can see it!

    Yes, rosemary and basil are both on my list of herbs to acquire. I use rosemary for robust meats like venison, lamb, and elk. I could use basil by the handful for making spaghetti sauce!

    (no subject)

    Date: 2009-04-07 06:53 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] jolantru.livejournal.com
    How about the sword's POV?

    (no subject)

    Date: 2009-04-07 07:08 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] kadiera.livejournal.com
    and the naming of swords - what if a sword gets stuck with a really bad name?

    The thought that came to mind here was that there's a Jack Chalker series where the "hero" barbarian names the last unnamed dwarven sword "Irving" after his son, because he always liked the name Irving. How embarrasing must that be for the sword?

    Poem

    Date: 2009-04-07 11:24 pm (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
    I've always been fascinated by the bizarre names from Puritan tradition, and by the possible drawbacks that could attend the creation of a talking sword. So "The Sword from the Foundling House" tells of a sword abandoned shortly after creation, and how Flie-Fornication finally found himself a hero. This poem is free verse that relies on imagery, and some alliteration and assonance, to give it the flair of good fantasy diction.

    88 lines, Buy It Now = custom pricing $44

    Edited Date: 2009-04-08 06:01 pm (UTC)

    Done for the Night

    Date: 2009-04-08 07:49 am (UTC)
    From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
    I am done writing for now. Thank you all for an adventurous day.

    Ideas, please leave me alone the rest of the night so I can get some sleep.

    *flop* zzzzzz...

    story about live fish

    Date: 2009-04-09 01:30 am (UTC)
    From: (Anonymous)
    An interesting story of Japanese and live fresh fish
    http://shabbarsuterwala.blogspot.com/2009/04/japanese-and-fresh-fish-story.html

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