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This poem came out of the December 6, 2011 Poetry Fishbowl.  It was inspired by a prompt from [livejournal.com profile] idhren24.  It was sponsored by [livejournal.com profile] the_vulture


The Chocolate Goddess


Her skin is the color of cocoa,
smooth and sleek and sweet.
She sees herself
in the sumptuous curves
of Yemaya and Oshun,
in the rippling limbs
of Parvati and Lakshmi,
in the dark wild curls
of Aphrodite and Artemis.

When she dances,
her flashing feet span the continents.
When the runs,
her powerful legs pound
against the pavement,
steady as a beating drum.

She believes in
all things in moderation,
including moderation --
for her body is her temple
and her goddesses
love both exertion and indulgence.

She dances, she runs,
and her heart soars heavenward.
She breaks apart the chocolate goddess
on her altar and it melts in her mouth,
the sweet dark milk of paradise.

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Date: 2011-12-10 02:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-vulture.livejournal.com
I love this poem, but...

>>When the runs,
her powerful legs pound
against the pavement,<<

It's a typo, but given both 'the runs' in close associate with chocolate, it's an unintentionally funny one. :P

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Date: 2011-12-10 02:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-vulture.livejournal.com
Typos aside though, it's a very sensuous poem and it draws such beautiful pictures. (And now I need to figure out where I can get a Goddess figure chocolate mold...)

Edit: Found one: http://www.silverenchantments.com/spiralgoddesschocolatemold_candymold.html

...and JACKPOT: http://www.silverenchantments.com/wiccancandymolds.html
Edited Date: 2011-12-10 02:58 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2011-12-10 05:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] westrider.livejournal.com
Bookmarked! There are several of those I need to pick up, starting with the Mjollnir and moving on from there.

Many thanks!

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Date: 2011-12-10 05:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-vulture.livejournal.com
You're welcome! Yeah, I'm kinda lookin' at the Elder Futhark, myself. :)

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Date: 2011-12-10 05:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] westrider.livejournal.com
That's just...wow. Trying to figure out which adjectives should go first. Beautiful and sexy and delicious and just Mmmm.

Yay!

Date: 2011-12-10 09:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
I'm glad you found this poem to your taste.

Re: Yay!

Date: 2011-12-11 07:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] westrider.livejournal.com
I'm glad you found this poem to your taste.

Was the pun intended there, or was it just fortuitous?

Re: Yay!

Date: 2011-12-11 08:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] westrider.livejournal.com
I kind of thought so, but I had to check.

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