Oh, this is excellent. I love the idea that verses mark the farthest point, and that everything is written on the way out. No point in giving directions if you didn't pick good enough ones to make it out alive yourself.
ROUSes! *giggle* Yikes to that.
The pun of "deer" and "hart" delighted me.
I enjoyed getting to see more examples of Afta. I love the idea that short messages and poetry have the lines between them blurred, that poetry is just something that bubbles up like that. I remember how satisfying simple rhymes were when I was a child, the satisfaction of fitting sounds together like that when language was new, so it makes sense that young scrounges would be drawn to that as well.
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Date: 2022-01-11 01:15 am (UTC)ROUSes! *giggle* Yikes to that.
The pun of "deer" and "hart" delighted me.
I enjoyed getting to see more examples of Afta. I love the idea that short messages and poetry have the lines between them blurred, that poetry is just something that bubbles up like that. I remember how satisfying simple rhymes were when I was a child, the satisfaction of fitting sounds together like that when language was new, so it makes sense that young scrounges would be drawn to that as well.