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Based on an audience poll, this is the freebie for the December 1, 2020 Poetry Fishbowl making its $200 goal. It was spillover from the October 6, 2020 Poetry Fishbowl. It was inspired by prompts from [personal profile] siliconshaman, [personal profile] bairnsidhe, [personal profile] readera, and [personal profile] lone_cat. This poem belongs to the series Polychrome Heroics and Schrodinger's Heroes.

WARNING: This poem contains disturbing material that may upset some readers. Highlight to read the warnings, some of which are spoilers. It includes relationship challenges, interdimensional travel, major character death, universe death, refugee children, and other challenges. If these are touchy topics for you, please consider your tastes and headspace before deciding whether this is something you want to read.


"The Glass Hammer Knocks on the Nursery Door"

[Wednesday, September 23, 2015]


Not far from the cottage that
Elonso and Davide shared with
their sons, a small forest wrapped
around the edge of the compound.

The land there was rumpled and
rocky, left wild because it would
be too difficult to develop.

Elonso walked beside
his bodyguard Edoardo.

Twilight was just falling,
the liminal time that made
the forest seem more magical.

Most of the leaves were still green,
but some were starting to turn gold,
drifting down through the sunbeams
to land on the dark brown ground.

"Autumn equinox today," Elonso said.

"A time of balance," said Edoardo.
"How are you doing, my friend?"

"Better than I was earlier
this year," Elonso admitted.
"Moving to Italy was hard, but
I'd do anything for the boys.
I'm getting used to it here."

"You and Davide?"
Edoardo said gently.

"We're ... working it out,"
Elonso said. "That hasn't
been easy, but I think that
we'll be okay in the end."

Davide had been a superhero,
but had turned his cape --
kidnapping Elonso and
their sons -- to keep
the family together.

It had been rough, but
they'd made progress.

"Good," said Edoardo.
"You deserve happiness."

"Everyone deserves
happiness," Elonso said.

Up ahead, the sunbeams
seemed to condense in
the shadows, twinkling into
lines, almost like a door.

"Get behind me," Edoardo said,
pulling Elonso back even as
the bodyguard stepped forward.

Then they heard a baby cry.

Both men bolted forward,
loping over uneven ground.

What they found in the hollow
of stone defied explanation.

There was a sturdy playpen
crammed with children, at least
a dozen from infants to preschoolers.
The infants had been swaddled
and hung along the sides, with
the toddlers standing in the center.

There was a large gray machine
that gave off wisps of cool vapor, with
a column of green lights down its front.

Leaning heavily on the machine
was a woman with long blonde hair.

At the sound of their approach,
she looked up. One lens of
her large round glasses
was cracked clear across.

"I need your help," she said.

"What do you need?"
Elonso said, stepping up.

"Sanctuary for our children,"
she said. "My name is Alex.
I'm from another dimension --"

"What?" Elonso said, shocked.

"There isn't much time!" she barked.

"We'll listen without interrupting,"
Edoardo said. "Tell us what you can."

"There was a fight. They holed
the Tef -- the Teflon Tesseract --
no way to fix it. Quantum energy
pouring through, going to flood
the whole dimension before long."

"Jesus Christ," Elonso muttered,
then waved for her to continue.

"We only had enough energy
to open the gate once, so we ...
filled it by weight. Pat's kids,
Chris' baby cousins, and
the gamete/embryo bank of
the Waxahachie Fertility Clinic,"
Alex said, hugging the machine.

Elonso realized that all of
the children wore nametags.
Well, at least that was something.

"We will see your children safe,"
Edoardo promised. "I am of
the Marionettes, and children
are among our responsibilities."

"They helped my family,"
Elonso said. "You came
to a good place, Alex."

She smiled faintly. "Yes,
this dimension has
a good reputation."

"Is there anything else
we can do?" Edoardo said.
"We have healers here --"

"No," Alex said, waving a hand.
Sparks glittered at her fingertips,
dripping off like water droplets.
"Quantum instability. Won't be
long now. Nothing you can do
for me, I was in the control room
trying to fix the Tef before we
realized how bad it was."

Elonso's stomach churned,
thinking of his own family.
"What about the children?"

"All from outside the Rim,"
Alex said. "They'll be fine."

The dripping was faster now.
Elonso couldn't see her fingers.

"Your dimension, if it's failing --
how close is it to our own?"
Edoardo said urgently.
"Are we in danger too?"

"No. Lifeboat," Alex said.
"I set the gate to a safe place,
then pulled it in after me."

"How does that even work?"
Elonso said, shaking his head.

"It's like ... pulling one lace
through on your shoe," Alex said.
"The bow still collapses, but the knot
stops it from unraveling everything else."

The sparks flowed up her arms now,
running in lambent streams until
her whole form was lined in gold.

And then she was gone.

Elonso and Edoardo were
left in the liminal woods with
nothing but a bunch of babies,
a softly steaming machine,
and questions that could
never be answered.

While Edoardo called
the compound and asked
for a medical teleporter,
Elonso did what he did best.

He comforted the little ones.

* * *

Notes:

This is NOT core!Alex and dimension, but alters from another dimension.

In Terramagne-Italy, Davide and Elonso share a cottage which belongs to a Marionette compound just outside of Velletri, Lazio, Italy. This forest fills a rugged area on one edge of the compound, left wild because it is too jumbled to develop easily. So they use it as a private park.

Liminal time lies between the ordinary times, like equinoxes and twilight. Unusual things can happen then.

Babies in a lifeboat appear often in literature.

(no subject)

Date: 2020-12-10 12:50 am (UTC)
bairnsidhe: (Default)
From: [personal profile] bairnsidhe
Honestly I'm a little surprised that they went with the embryos rather than living kids outside of their family. Surely not every kid in town is Chris's cousin, so I'm sure this list leaves a large number of children back in the collapsing dimension, and a lot of these kids with dead friends as well as family.

Re: Well ...

Date: 2020-12-10 01:49 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Also, the family groups may have involved either a creche-childcare setup, or mobilizing a phone tree/social network to drop everyone off, and therefore being much quicker than driving all over town.

Hmmm...did they maybe set up a phone tree or 'Tef Wierdness Alerts' for things like 'Stay indoors until we've caught all the facehuggers,' or 'please call us if you see the tye-dye Bigfeet,' that was used to summon everyone to a central location?

Being trusted with someone's kids is a major indicator of how much they trust you. (So is seeing exactly how kids interact with a given adult.)

The handful of people I know who'd listen to me if I said "Give me your kid and RUN" is pretty small...and most of them already consider me a reliable authority on risk assessments.

(no subject)

Date: 2020-12-10 01:27 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
[Sorry, long ramble.]

That is odd; but I can think of a few possible explanations:

1) There may have been a time crunch, and they only had time for stopping at 2-3 places.

2) They prioritized family ('cuz that's how humans are wired), then ran out of space after 15+ related kids, and while they had enough space for a cooler/lunchboxwith embryos, they couldn't fit another actual person.

3) If you need to grab the maximum number of people quickly going door-to-door won't cut it (too many arguments); you're gonna cherry-pick the people who will accept "No time to explain, get in the truck!" Mostly this will be people you know well.

4) First-draft crisis plans are just plain weird, doubly so if they're a new problem and/or you can't refine them.

I suspect it was a combo of space and time constraints, filtered through various social stuff. And then they had to go with a plan slapped together in 10 minutes or less.

Also, some cultural notes:

I can reasonably see the Pat and Chris younglings that are too young for school being watched in large groups.

- Chris' family is not wealthy enough to afford individual child care per child. If both parents (or a single parent) need(s) to work, it makes sense to pool childcare with Grandma or whoever, for both financial and social reasons. (Also, in some parts of the rural US, 'cousins' extends to 5th cousins/shared g-g-g-g- grandparents.)

- Pat's family is poly; I'm guessing that the childcare-inclined adults just act as stay-at-home parents for /everyone's/ kids, which might end up being a lot of kids, depending on how big the family is.

-Also, either arrangement could easily include a visiting friend (or more), for any number of reasons.

And in large families or rural areas where there aren't many playmates, you may indeed have a bunch of friends from the same clan or household. (Clan =/= household.) I can think of at least two examples from my family histories.

Re: Yes ...

Date: 2020-12-10 02:02 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Thanks.

Disasters...are messy. And most people won't really understand until they seen or been involved in a lot of not-good stuff.

Me? I listen. I read voraciously, about a lot of things, including disaster prep, psychology, and sociology. I'm usually puzzling out new ideas or problems in the back of my mind /for fun/. I assimilate very odd sources of information into my worldview, then jury-rig them to new problems. I am the anxious prepared one. I've had people casually mention to me horrible things they lived through, that I can't fix or stop. And I have had to do 'resource triage' (prior to this year) because there's not enough stuff or time to go around.

Sometimes you can't fix the world. Sometimes there aren't any real choices, and you choose something because everything else is worse.

Re: Yes ...

Date: 2020-12-10 03:06 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
>>People call me paranoid. That doesn't stop me from being usually right.<<

It's not paranoia if its neccesary.

And there's an annoying tendency for people to decry your preparing...right up until they need your help or stuff.

>>...their alleged professional,...<<

Some of these things, I suspect I'm more accesable than the official person. (Also; personnel triage, especially recently.)

And flipped around, I get tired of (other) people being helpy at me rather than being helpful (or failing that, at least listening to me).

>>We've never had a lot of resources, and that's true of most groups I work with.<<

Yep. Everything from designing paperwork, to fixing up ratty old bicyles.

Re: Yes ...

Date: 2020-12-10 03:14 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
What I'd really like to see is one where the anxious prepper with PTSD... is a valuable member of the team, is listened to and respected, and isn't mocked/taken advantage of/treated like a joke.

(Basically, like Branch from Trolls, but with everyone actually having high-quality social skills, instead of acting like toddlers on a sugar high.)

Re: Yes ...

Date: 2020-12-10 03:16 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Oh, and it might be nice to see the 'wee herds of kids' having fun in an intact dimension sometime.

Re: Yes ...

Date: 2020-12-10 05:20 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Could involve a small town or planned community. The Chris-lings at least could be subdivided into different-yet-nearby units.

Re: Yes ...

Date: 2020-12-10 06:28 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I was going for 'keep together in the same family or neighborhood or preferably both,' but not necessarily requiring one household to adopt, like, 10+ kids at once. And definitely not separating them permanently!

While I'm familiar with the concept of 'raised by the clan,' as a thing that happens, I had a mostly-standard American nuclear family upbringing with a parental divorce and no siblings. (All my cousins are a different age group, and live far away.)

The closest match in my family history that did something similar /did/ have age-cohorts of cousins...but those get-togethers stopped about forty years before I was born.

Basically, I'm guessing they'll be closer than myself and my cousins, or myself and my schoolmates, and while I don't think going home to different houses on the same street would be terrible, I really don't have the emotional knowledge of that sort of a sibling/peer/playmate relationship.

(I do expect they likely will be clingy once they start missing their parents, or get weirded out by being in Italy-not-Texas...)

(no subject)

Date: 2024-12-19 11:03 pm (UTC)
siliconshaman: black cat against the moon (Default)
From: [personal profile] siliconshaman

Numbers... you can fit a LOT of frozen embryos in a very small space.

(no subject)

Date: 2020-12-10 01:56 am (UTC)
siliconshaman: black cat against the moon (Default)
From: [personal profile] siliconshaman

wowsers.. that...that was more of a punch than expected. I mean, I know what my prompt was, but I did not expect it to be that.

So.. a bunch of inter-dimensional foundlings. That's going to lead to unanswerable questions in a few years.

and poor Alex... at least quantum decoherence isn't painful, but still.

and yeah, the Tef is one of the few things worse to shoot at than nuclear weapons. That's a 'say bye-bye to your universe' ... hm, the dissolution would take time to spread as well. I'm not sure I want to try and imagine being trapped in a reality that's unravelling.

(no subject)

Date: 2020-12-10 02:08 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
The dissolving scene from Avengers...or the tsunami scene from San Andres.

Hopefully it didn't last long enough for too much "Screw the Rules, its the End of the World" violence...

As for the kids...report them as 'abandoned in the woods,' or give them forged papers, or use connections to expedite real papers.

Terramagne is going to need policies for interdimensional refugees if this sort of thing keeps happening...

(no subject)

Date: 2020-12-10 02:19 am (UTC)
siliconshaman: black cat against the moon (Default)
From: [personal profile] siliconshaman

Yeah, I thought of both of those scenes, or the beach scene from Deep Impact... or this XKCD

and yeah, I hope it wasn't too long for them, just long enough to say goodbye or have a glass of wine and watch the last sunset.

Re: Thoughts

Date: 2020-12-10 03:10 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
>>Only one landing, but sometimes the message gets into adjacent dimensions, which really sucks.<<

Better to check, if you can. Just in case...

Re: Thoughts

Date: 2020-12-10 04:56 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Thalassia and the Maldives are going to be a very interesting place in 50 years. Well, more than now, anyway.

Hmmm...I wonder how those aliens in Antarctica deal with immigration? ("I hate people so I'm going to be a therapy human in Antarctica! Yes, I'm sure, if I don't have to deal with all this social nonsense!")

Re: Thoughts

Date: 2020-12-10 05:50 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
>>LOL yes. That's Antarctica already. Continent of the Weirdos.<<

Isn't that every 'newly discovered inhospitable wilderness' after about 100yrs? (See: New England, the Wild West, the rest of the Americas, Australia, age of sail pirate crews/ships...)

And logically extended to:

"[Bleep], we're being invaded by aliens."
[Few years later] "So wait, all these invaders are incompetents or political dissidents?"
[Few more years later; aliens] "Okay, who had the bright idea to put all the troublemakers in the same place as these crazy-smart, crazy-aggresive aliens?"

Or, in other words, this fanfic:
https://archiveofourown.org/works/2613368/chapters/16283231#workskin

Uh oh

Date: 2020-12-10 02:01 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
**curls up in the corner under the microfyne**

Re: Uh oh

Date: 2020-12-10 03:44 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
**snuggles**

is ouch

ECR.

Also, where is the L-Earth portal to Terramagne?

Re: Uh oh

Date: 2020-12-10 04:19 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] jtthomas

cough progress is being made. nuff said at current; bit of a mess due to Circumstances. poof

(no subject)

Date: 2020-12-10 02:38 am (UTC)
chanter1944: Émilie Agreste, with a young Adrien (ML - Émilie: pour mon fils)
From: [personal profile] chanter1944
So very glad this is neither the core!dimension nor the oranje!one intersecting with Terramagne. *wincing forever*

(no subject)

Date: 2020-12-10 05:50 am (UTC)
wispfox: (Default)
From: [personal profile] wispfox
Now I'm wondering if the uptick in soups in T-America is at birth (and maybe genetic) or later (via environment or all the drugs out there).

Like - would any of these kids be soups? Would their kids?

(no subject)

Date: 2020-12-10 05:56 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
A bit of both, maybe?

Re: Thoughts

Date: 2020-12-10 06:58 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Pat's kids might also throw some other oddities. Pat seemed to seek out a very diverse friendgroup. I suspect that he would also seek out a diverse group of partners. (Also, I seem to recall that some subcultures may be more chill than the mainstream about oddities and differences; the fewer people you've got, the less likely you can get away with being overly fussy.) So some of the spouses may have had other abilities or talents.

And there's not all that much stopping any of them from being supernaries of some sort, if that's what they want to do.

(Chris's nephew/cousin in that other story seemed to be doing alright as a moral human being, even if it was just standard-grade human empathy.)

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