Poetry Fishbowl Open!
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ysabetwordsmithThe Poetry Fishbowl is now CLOSED. Thank you for your time and attention. I'm still writing, so please keep an eye on this post.
Starting now, the Poetry Fishbowl is open! Today's theme is "pet peeves." I will be checking this page periodically throughout the day. When people make suggestions, I'll pick some and weave them together into a poem ... and then another ... and so on. I'm hoping to get a lot of ideas and a lot of poems.
Click to read the linkback poem "Thinking River Thoughts" (An Army of One, 14 verses available).
NOTE: While it has been my goal to write at least one poem for each prompter, that's not a guarantee; I only promise to cover the donors. Because I'm still recovering from getting flattened last week, and I have other obligations later this week, the fishbowl may be a bit shallower than usual.
What Is a Poetry Fishbowl?
Writing is usually considered a solitary pursuit. One exception to this is a fascinating exercise called a "fishbowl." This has various forms, but all of them basically involve some kind of writing in public, usually with interaction between author and audience. A famous example is Harlan Ellison's series of "stories under glass" in which he sits in a bookstore window and writes a new story based on an idea that someone gives him. Writing classes sometimes include a version where students watch each other write, often with students calling out suggestions which are chalked up on the blackboard for those writing to use as inspiration.
In this online version of a Poetry Fishbowl, I begin by setting a theme; today's theme is "pet peeves." I invite people to suggest characters, settings, and other things relating to that theme. Then I use those prompts as inspiration for writing poems.
Cyberfunded Creativity
I'm practicing cyberfunded creativity. If you enjoy what I'm doing and want to see more of it, please feed the Bard. The following options are currently available:
1) Sponsor the Fishbowl -- Here is a PayPal button for donations. There is no specific requirement, but $1 is the minimum recommended size for PayPal transactions since they take a cut from every one. You can also donate via check or money order sent by postal mail. If you make a donation and tell me about it, I promise to use one of your prompts. Anonymous donations are perfectly welcome, just won't get that perk. General donations will be tallied, and at the end of the fishbowl I’ll post a list of eligible poems based on the total funding; then the audience can vote on which they want to see posted.
2) Swim, Fishie, Swim! -- A feature in conjunction with fishbowl sponsorship is this progress meter showing the amount donated. There are multiple perks, the top one being a half-price poetry sale on one series when donations reach $300.
3) Buy It Now! -- Gakked from various e-auction sites, this feature allows you to sponsor a specific poem. If you don't want to wait for some editor to buy and publish my poem so you can read it, well, now you don't have to. Sponsoring a poem means that I will immediately post it on my blog for everyone to see, with the name of the sponsor (or another dedicate) if you wish; plus you get a nonexclusive publication right, so you can post it on your own blog or elsewhere as long as you keep the credits intact. You'll need to tell me the title of the poem you want to sponsor. I'm basing the prices on length, and they're comparable to what I typically make selling poetry to magazines (semi-pro rates according to Duotrope's Digest).
0-10 lines: $5
11-25 lines: $10
26-40 lines: $15
41-60 lines: $20
Poems over 60 lines, or with very intricate structure, fall into custom pricing.
4) Commission a scrapbook page. I can render a chosen poem in hardcopy format, on colorful paper, using archival materials for background and any embellishments. This will be suitable for framing or for adding to a scrapbook. Commission details are here. See latest photos of sample scrapbooked poems: "Sample Scrapbooked Poems 1-24-11"
5) Spread the word. Echo or link to this post on your LiveJournal, other blog, Twitter, Facebook, MySpace, Digg, StumbleUpon, or any other social network. Useful Twitter hashtags include #poetryfishbowl and #promptcall. Encourage people to come here and participate in the fishbowl. If you have room for it, including your own prompt will give your readers an idea of what the prompts should look like; ideally, update later to include the thumbnail of the poem I write, and a link to the poem if it gets published. If there is at least one new prompter or donor, I will post an extra freebie poem.
Linkback perk: I have a spare series poem available, and each linkback will reveal a verse of the poem. One person can do multiple links if they're on different services, like Dreamwidth or Twitter, rather than all on LiveJournal. Comment with a link to where you posted. "Thinking River Thoughts" belongs to the series An Army of One and has 14 verses available.
Additional Notes
1) I customarily post replies to prompt posts telling people which of their prompts I'm using, with a brief description of the resulting poem(s). If you want to know what's available, watch for those "thumbnails."
2) You don't have to pay me to see a poem based on a prompt that you gave me. I try to send copies of poems to people, mostly using the LJ message function. (Anonymous prompters will miss this perk unless you give me your eddress.) These are for-your-eyes-only, though, not for sharing.
3) Sponsors of the Poetry Fishbowl in general, or of specific poems, will gain access to an extra post in appreciation of their generosity. While you're on the Donors list, you can view all of the custom-locked posts in that category. Click the "donors" tag to read the archive of those. I've also posted a list of other donor perks there. I customarily leave donor names on the list for two months, so you'll get to see the perk-post from this month and next.
4) After the Poetry Fishbowl concludes, I will post a list of unsold poems and their prices, to make it easier for folks to see what they might want to sponsor.
5) If donations total $100 by Friday evening then you get a free $15 poem; $150 gets you a free $20 poem; and $200 gets you a free epic, posted after the Poetry Fishbowl. These will usually be series poems if I have them; otherwise I may offer non-series poems or series poems in a different size. If donations reach $250, you get one step toward a bonus fishbowl; three of these activates the perk, and they don't have to be three months in a row. Everyone will get to vote on which series, and give prompts during the extra fishbowl, although it may be a half-day rather than a whole day. If donations reach $300, there will be a half-price sale in one series.
Feed the Fish!
Now's your chance to participate in the creative process by posting ideas for me to write about. Today's theme is "pet peeves." I'll be soliciting ideas for nemeses, rivals, jerks, bullies, upstanders, fussbudgets, touch-dominant people, problem-solvers, troubled relationships, brats, high-conflict personalities, supervillains, superheroes, psycho bosses, neatniks, picking on people, finding flaws, laying blame, failure analysis, quality control, schools, businesses, government buildings, households, athletic venues, other areas prone to conflicts, vermin, lack of habituation to stimuli, the stupid it burns like hydrogen, hypersensitivity, touch aversion, allergens, bullshit, dissatisfaction, and poetic forms in particular. But anything is welcome, really. If you manage to recommend a form that I don't recognize, I will probably pounce on it and ask you for its rules. I do have The New Book of Forms by Lewis Turco which covers most common and many obscure forms.
If you want ideas for emotions to pick, there's a prompt set of them on the Bingo Card Generator. You can also find big lists of emotions by type and intensity, and this flower chart shows their relation to each other. I am also a huge fan of linguistics unto itself, especially where one language has a word that others don't, so here are some emotions that English doesn't have words for. I enjoy writing writing vocabulary poems that basically use one word as a title and then muse about it; that rarely comes up in the fishbowl, so now's a good time if this is your thing too.
I'll post at least one of the fishbowl poems here so you-all can enjoy it. (Remember, you get an extra freebie poem if someone new posts a prompt or makes a donation, and additional perks at $100-$300 in donations. Linkbacks reveal verses of "Thinking River Thoughts.") The rest of the poems will go into my archive for magazine submission.
Starting now, the Poetry Fishbowl is open! Today's theme is "pet peeves." I will be checking this page periodically throughout the day. When people make suggestions, I'll pick some and weave them together into a poem ... and then another ... and so on. I'm hoping to get a lot of ideas and a lot of poems.
Click to read the linkback poem "Thinking River Thoughts" (An Army of One, 14 verses available).
NOTE: While it has been my goal to write at least one poem for each prompter, that's not a guarantee; I only promise to cover the donors. Because I'm still recovering from getting flattened last week, and I have other obligations later this week, the fishbowl may be a bit shallower than usual.
What Is a Poetry Fishbowl?
Writing is usually considered a solitary pursuit. One exception to this is a fascinating exercise called a "fishbowl." This has various forms, but all of them basically involve some kind of writing in public, usually with interaction between author and audience. A famous example is Harlan Ellison's series of "stories under glass" in which he sits in a bookstore window and writes a new story based on an idea that someone gives him. Writing classes sometimes include a version where students watch each other write, often with students calling out suggestions which are chalked up on the blackboard for those writing to use as inspiration.
In this online version of a Poetry Fishbowl, I begin by setting a theme; today's theme is "pet peeves." I invite people to suggest characters, settings, and other things relating to that theme. Then I use those prompts as inspiration for writing poems.
Cyberfunded Creativity
I'm practicing cyberfunded creativity. If you enjoy what I'm doing and want to see more of it, please feed the Bard. The following options are currently available:
1) Sponsor the Fishbowl -- Here is a PayPal button for donations. There is no specific requirement, but $1 is the minimum recommended size for PayPal transactions since they take a cut from every one. You can also donate via check or money order sent by postal mail. If you make a donation and tell me about it, I promise to use one of your prompts. Anonymous donations are perfectly welcome, just won't get that perk. General donations will be tallied, and at the end of the fishbowl I’ll post a list of eligible poems based on the total funding; then the audience can vote on which they want to see posted.
2) Swim, Fishie, Swim! -- A feature in conjunction with fishbowl sponsorship is this progress meter showing the amount donated. There are multiple perks, the top one being a half-price poetry sale on one series when donations reach $300.
3) Buy It Now! -- Gakked from various e-auction sites, this feature allows you to sponsor a specific poem. If you don't want to wait for some editor to buy and publish my poem so you can read it, well, now you don't have to. Sponsoring a poem means that I will immediately post it on my blog for everyone to see, with the name of the sponsor (or another dedicate) if you wish; plus you get a nonexclusive publication right, so you can post it on your own blog or elsewhere as long as you keep the credits intact. You'll need to tell me the title of the poem you want to sponsor. I'm basing the prices on length, and they're comparable to what I typically make selling poetry to magazines (semi-pro rates according to Duotrope's Digest).
0-10 lines: $5
11-25 lines: $10
26-40 lines: $15
41-60 lines: $20
Poems over 60 lines, or with very intricate structure, fall into custom pricing.
4) Commission a scrapbook page. I can render a chosen poem in hardcopy format, on colorful paper, using archival materials for background and any embellishments. This will be suitable for framing or for adding to a scrapbook. Commission details are here. See latest photos of sample scrapbooked poems: "Sample Scrapbooked Poems 1-24-11"
5) Spread the word. Echo or link to this post on your LiveJournal, other blog, Twitter, Facebook, MySpace, Digg, StumbleUpon, or any other social network. Useful Twitter hashtags include #poetryfishbowl and #promptcall. Encourage people to come here and participate in the fishbowl. If you have room for it, including your own prompt will give your readers an idea of what the prompts should look like; ideally, update later to include the thumbnail of the poem I write, and a link to the poem if it gets published. If there is at least one new prompter or donor, I will post an extra freebie poem.
Linkback perk: I have a spare series poem available, and each linkback will reveal a verse of the poem. One person can do multiple links if they're on different services, like Dreamwidth or Twitter, rather than all on LiveJournal. Comment with a link to where you posted. "Thinking River Thoughts" belongs to the series An Army of One and has 14 verses available.
Additional Notes
1) I customarily post replies to prompt posts telling people which of their prompts I'm using, with a brief description of the resulting poem(s). If you want to know what's available, watch for those "thumbnails."
2) You don't have to pay me to see a poem based on a prompt that you gave me. I try to send copies of poems to people, mostly using the LJ message function. (Anonymous prompters will miss this perk unless you give me your eddress.) These are for-your-eyes-only, though, not for sharing.
3) Sponsors of the Poetry Fishbowl in general, or of specific poems, will gain access to an extra post in appreciation of their generosity. While you're on the Donors list, you can view all of the custom-locked posts in that category. Click the "donors" tag to read the archive of those. I've also posted a list of other donor perks there. I customarily leave donor names on the list for two months, so you'll get to see the perk-post from this month and next.
4) After the Poetry Fishbowl concludes, I will post a list of unsold poems and their prices, to make it easier for folks to see what they might want to sponsor.
5) If donations total $100 by Friday evening then you get a free $15 poem; $150 gets you a free $20 poem; and $200 gets you a free epic, posted after the Poetry Fishbowl. These will usually be series poems if I have them; otherwise I may offer non-series poems or series poems in a different size. If donations reach $250, you get one step toward a bonus fishbowl; three of these activates the perk, and they don't have to be three months in a row. Everyone will get to vote on which series, and give prompts during the extra fishbowl, although it may be a half-day rather than a whole day. If donations reach $300, there will be a half-price sale in one series.
Feed the Fish!
Now's your chance to participate in the creative process by posting ideas for me to write about. Today's theme is "pet peeves." I'll be soliciting ideas for nemeses, rivals, jerks, bullies, upstanders, fussbudgets, touch-dominant people, problem-solvers, troubled relationships, brats, high-conflict personalities, supervillains, superheroes, psycho bosses, neatniks, picking on people, finding flaws, laying blame, failure analysis, quality control, schools, businesses, government buildings, households, athletic venues, other areas prone to conflicts, vermin, lack of habituation to stimuli, the stupid it burns like hydrogen, hypersensitivity, touch aversion, allergens, bullshit, dissatisfaction, and poetic forms in particular. But anything is welcome, really. If you manage to recommend a form that I don't recognize, I will probably pounce on it and ask you for its rules. I do have The New Book of Forms by Lewis Turco which covers most common and many obscure forms.
If you want ideas for emotions to pick, there's a prompt set of them on the Bingo Card Generator. You can also find big lists of emotions by type and intensity, and this flower chart shows their relation to each other. I am also a huge fan of linguistics unto itself, especially where one language has a word that others don't, so here are some emotions that English doesn't have words for. I enjoy writing writing vocabulary poems that basically use one word as a title and then muse about it; that rarely comes up in the fishbowl, so now's a good time if this is your thing too.
I'll post at least one of the fishbowl poems here so you-all can enjoy it. (Remember, you get an extra freebie poem if someone new posts a prompt or makes a donation, and additional perks at $100-$300 in donations. Linkbacks reveal verses of "Thinking River Thoughts.") The rest of the poems will go into my archive for magazine submission.
Prompt for pet peeve
Date: 2016-09-06 07:01 pm (UTC)First day of cyber school for the Goth Geekling. :-D Sending donation too!
Re: Prompt for pet peeve
Date: 2016-09-07 10:25 am (UTC)I actually kept this one in the $20 range, and I've got your donation, so I'll post it when I have time.
(no subject)
Date: 2016-09-06 07:02 pm (UTC)Turq, on the other hand, is inviting beautiful puns in my mind, because the caney doesn't yet have a pet peeve yet loves being petted.
Poem
Date: 2016-09-09 04:08 am (UTC)374 lines, Buy It Now = $187
Coulson
Date: 2016-09-06 07:49 pm (UTC)Just a thought; I have no idea what Phil's pet peeve might be.
Re: Coulson
Date: 2016-09-06 07:51 pm (UTC)Re: Coulson
Date: 2016-09-06 11:34 pm (UTC)Jules and Mallory
Date: 2016-09-06 09:17 pm (UTC)Bonus points for a /good/ reaction from Officer Bishop, who is not afraid of Mallory, even though he recognizes her as a supervillain "on vacation."
Re: Jules and Mallory
Date: 2016-09-10 08:25 am (UTC)420 lines, Buy It Now = $210
(no subject)
Date: 2016-09-06 10:08 pm (UTC)Farasat has opinions about people Maryam is considering courting.
(I might be stuck on peevish pets.)
Poem
Date: 2016-09-06 11:20 pm (UTC)119 lines, Buy It Now = $119
Re: Poem
Date: 2016-09-07 05:41 am (UTC)Re: Poem
Date: 2016-09-07 05:46 am (UTC):D
>> *examines pockets* Can I get back to you? <<
You certainly can. We don't have room to open another epic right now, but there are other options. One is to call for cosponsors and see if anyone else wants to team up. You've got a good chance; Maryam is popular and we haven't seen her recently. I also make payment plans for folks who want to break up a big price into several smaller installments (weekly, every two weeks, whatever).
Re: Poem
Date: 2016-09-07 05:48 am (UTC)I can do a third of the price total. A quarter would be better. Are there one or two (or more) people out there who'd like to team up?
I mean, c'mon, KITTY! And it's Maryam, Maryam is awesome, I miss her.
(no subject)
Date: 2016-09-06 10:09 pm (UTC)Somebody at Kraken has to clean up the mess left by a really inept supervillain, and is Not Happy about it.
Do any of your folx have a pronounced food sensitivity/allergy to something common that's not a problem for most people? (I'm thinking about Russ' rants about the prevalence of canola oil, which gives him major digestive troubles.)
Alternatively, being pressured to eat or drink something popular that you're not allergic to but just plain DON'T LIKE (me and coffee or booze). Bonus points if it includes the potentially-life-threatening "I thought if I didn't tell you what was in it, you wouldn't know you weren't supposed to like it" -- that's one of MY pet peeves! And you can push the social consequences as far as you want.
Poem
Date: 2016-09-08 08:34 pm (UTC)ALICIA AND JUDD
Date: 2016-09-06 10:40 pm (UTC)Re: ALICIA AND JUDD
Date: 2016-09-08 09:15 am (UTC)274 lines, Buy It Now = $137
late late laaaaate!
Date: 2016-09-07 02:15 am (UTC)*My biggest pet peeve to date, and here be a gross out warning: People chewing with their @#&*@&! mouths open! See also smacking their lips. EWWWW! I'm guilty of thinking quite loudly that the next customer to do either of these while on the telephone with me (it happens more often than I really care to think about, gag) will get smacked right in their smacky lips. Bad friendly phone lady, but at least that's never been said aloud. Okay, so, prompt. ... "Did you never have an adult explain to you just why that's disgusting?!" Who says this, to whom, and why, all up to you.
*Dirty dishes in the sink. Hey, it's got to be somebody's hot button issue.
*On the theme of peeved pets: Napoleon the telepathic kitten is thoroughly displeased, and showing it as only he would.
Re: late late laaaaate!
Date: 2016-09-08 08:34 pm (UTC)144 lines, Buy It Now = $72
(no subject)
Date: 2016-09-07 04:20 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2016-09-07 04:33 am (UTC)Poem
Date: 2016-09-07 10:25 am (UTC)Done for the night!
Date: 2016-09-07 10:32 am (UTC)