>> This is an interesting one so far. I'm glad you decided to try this exercise; it's neat to see the seeds of the Phil we've come to recognise being sown in this story. <<
Yay!
>> I remember the Cap-in-the-ice bit from a previous part, so it was nice to see that unpacked more. <<
As soon as I started this, I knew I wanted to play out that scene.
>> It's too bad I've caught up to the past few months though - pretty soon I'll run out of series! Not that there's any shortage of other stuff to read, but still. :-) <<
Yeah, I just finished this story.
>> On another note, at one point you have a "Phil says" in this chapter - is that a moment when he starts to think of himself differently, or did you mean to say Flip? <<
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Date: 2014-08-23 04:23 am (UTC)Yay!
>> I remember the Cap-in-the-ice bit from a previous part, so it was nice to see that unpacked more. <<
As soon as I started this, I knew I wanted to play out that scene.
>> It's too bad I've caught up to the past few months though - pretty soon I'll run out of series! Not that there's any shortage of other stuff to read, but still. :-) <<
Yeah, I just finished this story.
>> On another note, at one point you have a "Phil says" in this chapter - is that a moment when he starts to think of himself differently, or did you mean to say Flip? <<
That's a typo, and I fixed it.