Oh, that is beautiful. I love the final stanza and the radiator dragon. You've captured the feeling of camping wonderfully, if you ask me. There's the warmth and camaraderie of going camping, but also the darker feelings of what lies beyond the light. It's wonderful. ^_^
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Date: 2013-01-04 09:07 pm (UTC)