>> 1. Kernel Error. You write JARVIS amazingly well, and as much as the story hurts I think it might be your best. It reminds me of some of the things my twin has written in the best way.<<
Wow, that's quite a compliment. I love writing in dialect. I think it's important to use a character's own words to show their worldview.
>> 2. "Yellow fluff goes, Mew! Mew!" Yeah. Hulk with fluffs is adorable, and this line speaks to child me.<<
I confess to raiding my childhood memories of kittens for that scene.
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Date: 2018-01-22 09:43 pm (UTC)Wow, that's quite a compliment. I love writing in dialect. I think it's important to use a character's own words to show their worldview.
>> 2. "Yellow fluff goes, Mew! Mew!" Yeah. Hulk with fluffs is adorable, and this line speaks to child me.<<
I confess to raiding my childhood memories of kittens for that scene.