>> That may be because Turq automatically goes tonAnsel, who is slowly and surely becoming his safe person/space. <<
I have found that reader response depends overwhelmingly on story tone more than content. No matter how horrible the events, if the viewpoint character gets support or other positive things, readers will rate it much fluffier than a less violent story with no support and a glum tone.
>> Hmm does Ansel know of Mr. Dipper's dealings with young disadvantaged children and trying to pin him down <<
The police have suspicions about him and know about the gang, but he's a slippery fuck.
>> or does Mr. Dipper have people on the force covering his tracks? <<
He does not.
>> Either way Ansel has just found a new target to hunt down. <<
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Re: This one is sweet even with Mr. Dipper hurting Turq
Date: 2020-05-20 02:13 am (UTC)I have found that reader response depends overwhelmingly on story tone more than content. No matter how horrible the events, if the viewpoint character gets support or other positive things, readers will rate it much fluffier than a less violent story with no support and a glum tone.
>> Hmm does Ansel know of Mr. Dipper's dealings with young disadvantaged children and trying to pin him down <<
The police have suspicions about him and know about the gang, but he's a slippery fuck.
>> or does Mr. Dipper have people on the force covering his tracks? <<
He does not.
>> Either way Ansel has just found a new target to hunt down. <<
Oh, yeah.