It's definitely needing the buildup if the ink's as important to the story arc as your notes implied!
I love how you took the /simplest/ form, almost free verse, and made it more structured, more decorated... flourishes and swirls, rather than rigid restrictions.
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Re: Lovely
Date: 2015-05-19 08:17 pm (UTC)I love how you took the /simplest/ form, almost free verse, and made it more structured, more decorated... flourishes and swirls, rather than rigid restrictions.