OH, this was fun.

Date: 2015-05-07 08:32 pm (UTC)
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This reminded me of a much quieter version of our family dinners, with a "conversation cap" just to keep from giving readers whiplash, LOL.

Thanks for the link to tomato pie--I love the implications such a simple change in "pizza" can bring, both in characterization and in local color.

The characters are all different, not merely because of their food preferences. Somehow, you've managed to imply the different preferences come from their personality and heritage, with very few words. I'm impressed.
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