I got a few stanzas in and began laughing so much I lost my breath.Which, of course, meant I had to read the poem aloud to hubby! Doctor Infanta needs to meet Cold Cash, according to him, which would be a whole different kind of fun!
Oddly,there is one dangling thread--Fiddlesticks' injury, and Doctor Infanta's reaction to it, that make me practically dance in my seat in anticipation of a sequel.
What I liked best was the balance between danger and training, which didn't just imply that Hefty and Fiddlesticks are good cops, but showed it.
I'll come back and reread the links I've skipped today, I'm certain, but that's also a reminder to say thanks, specifically, for including them.
OH, lovely
Date: 2015-04-13 01:23 am (UTC)Oddly,there is one dangling thread--Fiddlesticks' injury, and Doctor Infanta's reaction to it, that make me practically dance in my seat in anticipation of a sequel.
What I liked best was the balance between danger and training, which didn't just imply that Hefty and Fiddlesticks are good cops, but showed it.
I'll come back and reread the links I've skipped today, I'm certain, but that's also a reminder to say thanks, specifically, for including them.