>> And terrifying, because it reads like what a panic attack feels like. <<
Yay! That is exactly what I wanted to convey, the visceral sense of terror and loss of control as logical thought breaks down.
>> And sad, and I'm really glad I already know how it works out. <<
It is sad that JARVIS goes through all that effectively alone, since nobody else knows what is happening to him. But sometimes you have to hit a problem face-on before you realize how bad it is and that you have solutions available that you didn't before.
>> I really enjoyed both this and Hide and Seek. I check your page everyday. I used to just check it for updates to your writing, though I've started reading the other stuff, too. <<
I'm thrilled that I've managed to hook your attention, and happy that you enjoy my work so much.
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dancing_serpent
Thank you!
Date: 2013-12-27 07:07 am (UTC)This was amazing. <<
I'm glad you liked it so much.
>> And terrifying, because it reads like what a panic attack feels like. <<
Yay! That is exactly what I wanted to convey, the visceral sense of terror and loss of control as logical thought breaks down.
>> And sad, and I'm really glad I already know how it works out. <<
It is sad that JARVIS goes through all that effectively alone, since nobody else knows what is happening to him. But sometimes you have to hit a problem face-on before you realize how bad it is and that you have solutions available that you didn't before.
>> I really enjoyed both this and Hide and Seek. I check your page everyday. I used to just check it for updates to your writing, though I've started reading the other stuff, too. <<
I'm thrilled that I've managed to hook your attention, and happy that you enjoy my work so much.