I admit I don't like this one quite as much as the other poems I've read by you - there's something about the rhythm that throws me off - but it's a wonderful piece of world-building and conlang vocabulary. There's a great sense of love for the desert in this piece and in the words you've chosen to describe/illustrate. I think dalagi is my favourite stanza. ^-^
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Date: 2013-01-04 09:19 pm (UTC)