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Poetry Fishbowl Open!
The Poetry Fishbowl is now CLOSED. Thank you for your time and assistance. Please keep an eye on this page as I am still writing.
Starting now, the Poetry Fishbowl is open! Today's theme is "Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic." I will be checking this page periodically throughout the day. When people make suggestions, I'll pick some and weave them together into a poem ... and then another ... and so on. I'm hoping to get a lot of ideas and a lot of poems.
I'm also allowing the inverse: "Any sufficiently advanced magic is indistinguishable from technology." Some nations in The Ocracies, like the Plutocracy of Aurea, have built much of their civilization on this.
Among my more relevant series:
Frankenstein's Family involves early-idiom science that can do some things modern-science can't.
The Godship Wanderers features a living ship and a variety of alien technology unfamliar to the characters.
Laquerware is Edopunk about technology built in layers.
P.I.E. is urban fantasy where magic and technology sometimes mix.
Polychrome Heroics has a great deal of gizmology and super-gizmology, along with some people whose superpowers blend magic and science.
The Steamsmith features alchemy instead of the science that underlies our world, which looks magical but follows the principles of scientific method.
The Blueshift Troupers is far-future SF featuring some alien technology, including hiveships and jumpgates, that nobody really knows how it works.
Schrodinger's Heroes is quantum science fiction about saving the world from alternate dimensions. What Alex does with the laws of physics can look like magic to anyone else.
Or you can ask for something new.
Currently eligible bingo card(s) for donors wishing to sponsor a square:
End of Summer Bingo Card 8-2-19
Hurt/Comfort Bingo Card 6-18-19
Click to read the linkback poem "The Beautiful Thing About Fear" (11 verses, Officer Pink).
What Is a Poetry Fishbowl?
Writing is usually considered a solitary pursuit. One exception to this is a fascinating exercise called a "fishbowl." This has various forms, but all of them basically involve some kind of writing in public, usually with interaction between author and audience. A famous example is Harlan Ellison's series of "stories under glass" in which he sits in a bookstore window and writes a new story based on an idea that someone gives him. Writing classes sometimes include a version where students watch each other write, often with students calling out suggestions which are chalked up on the blackboard for those writing to use as inspiration.
In this online version of a Poetry Fishbowl, I begin by setting a theme; today's theme is "Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic." I invite people to suggest characters, settings, and other things relating to that theme. Then I use those prompts as inspiration for writing poems.
Cyberfunded Creativity
I'm practicing cyberfunded creativity. If you enjoy what I'm doing and want to see more of it, please feed the Bard. The following options are currently available:
1) Sponsor the Fishbowl -- Here is a PayPal button for donations. There is no specific requirement, but $1 is the minimum recommended size for PayPal transactions since they take a cut from every one. You can also donate via check or money order sent by postal mail. If you make a donation and tell me about it, I promise to use one of your prompts. Anonymous donations are perfectly welcome, just won't get that perk. General donations will be tallied, and at the end of the fishbowl I’ll post a list of eligible poems based on the total funding; then the audience can vote on which they want to see posted.
2) Swim, Fishie, Swim! -- A feature in conjunction with fishbowl sponsorship is this progress meter showing the amount donated. There are multiple perks, the top one being a half-price poetry sale on one series when donations reach $300.
3) Buy It Now! -- Gakked from various e-auction sites, this feature allows you to sponsor a specific poem. If you don't want to wait for some editor to buy and publish my poem so you can read it, well, now you don't have to. Sponsoring a poem means that I will immediately post it on my blog for everyone to see, with the name of the sponsor (or another dedicate) if you wish; plus you get a nonexclusive publication right, so you can post it on your own blog or elsewhere as long as you keep the credits intact. You'll need to tell me the title of the poem you want to sponsor. I'm basing the prices on length, and they're comparable to what I typically make selling poetry to magazines (semi-pro rates according to Duotrope's Digest).
0-10 lines: $5
11-25 lines: $10
26-40 lines: $15
41-60 lines: $20
Poems over 60 lines, or with very intricate structure, fall into custom pricing.
4) Commission a scrapbook page. I can render a chosen poem in hardcopy format, on colorful paper, using archival materials for background and any embellishments. This will be suitable for framing or for adding to a scrapbook. Commission details are here. See latest photos of sample scrapbooked poems: "Sample Scrapbooked Poems 1-24-11"
5) Spread the word. Echo or link to this post on your Dreamwidth, other blog, Twitter, Facebook, Digg, StumbleUpon, or any other social network. Useful Twitter hashtags include #poetryfishbowl and #promptcall. Encourage people to come here and participate in the fishbowl. If you have room for it, including your own prompt will give your readers an idea of what the prompts should look like; ideally, update later to include the thumbnail of the poem I write, and a link to the poem if it gets published. If there is at least one new prompter or donor, I will post an extra freebie poem.
Linkback perk: I have a spare series poem available, and each linkback will reveal a verse of the poem. One person can do multiple links if they're on different services, like Dreamwidth or Twitter, rather than all on LiveJournal. Comment with a link to where you posted. "The Beautiful Thing About Fear" has 11 verses and belongs to Officer Pink.
Additional Notes
1) I customarily post replies to prompt posts telling people which of their prompts I'm using, with a brief description of the resulting poem(s). If you want to know what's available, watch for those "thumbnails."
2) You don't have to pay me to see a poem based on a prompt that you gave me. I try to send copies of poems to people, mostly using the LJ message function. (Anonymous prompters will miss this perk unless you give me your eddress.) These are for-your-eyes-only, though, not for sharing.
3) Sponsors of the Poetry Fishbowl in general, or of specific poems, will gain access to an extra post in appreciation of their generosity. While you're on the Donors list, you can view all of the custom-locked posts in that category. Click the "donors" tag to read the archive of those. I've also posted a list of other donor perks there. I customarily leave donor names on the list for two months, so you'll get to see the perk-post from this month and next.
4) After the Poetry Fishbowl concludes, I will post a list of unsold poems and their prices, to make it easier for folks to see what they might want to sponsor.
5) If donations total $100 by Friday evening then you get a free $15 poem; $150 gets you a free $20 poem; and $200 gets you a free epic, posted after the Poetry Fishbowl. These will usually be series poems if I have them; otherwise I may offer non-series poems or series poems in a different size. If donations reach $250, you get one step toward a bonus fishbowl; four of these activates the perk, and they don't have to be four months in a row. Everyone will get to vote on which series, and give prompts during the extra fishbowl, although it may be a half-day rather than a whole day. If donations reach $300, there will be a half-price sale in one series.
Feed the Fish!
Now's your chance to participate in the creative process by posting ideas for me to write about. Today's theme is "Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic." I'll be soliciting ideas for end users, new users, geeks, mechanics, designated users, inventors, Super-Gizmologists, living ships, futuristic soldiers, shysters, minions and masters/mistresses, apprentices, explorers, other people who use (or try to use, or purport to use) advanced technology, inventing tools, exploring new discoveries, creating connections, coming of age, learning what you can (and can't) do, frob twiddle and tweak, bending the laws of physics, accomplishing the impossible, recovering from setbacks, laboratories, factories, courtrooms, military bases, battlefields, supervillain lairs, police stations, public institutions, alien planets, alternate dimensions, cyberspace, other places where technology advances, gizmos, super-gizmos, ansibles, sufficiently advanced artifacts, other exotic devices, exotic materials (such as phlebotinum and unobtanium), quantum mechanics, mysterious archaeological artifacts, magical artifacts, instruction manuals (or lack thereof), user agreements, sorcery using the idiom of science, apprenticeship, fraud, free will, personal growth, determination, imprint vulnerability, failure, success, rites of passage, levels of civilization, and poetic forms in particular. But anything is welcome, really. If you manage to recommend a form that I don't recognize, I will probably pounce on it and ask you for its rules. I do have The New Book of Forms by Lewis Turco which covers most common and many obscure forms.
I'll post at least one of the fishbowl poems here so you-all can enjoy it. (Remember, you get an extra freebie poem if someone new posts a prompt or makes a donation, and additional perks at $100-$300 in donations. Linkbacks reveal verses of "The Beautiful Thing About Fear." The rest of the poems will go into my archive for future use.
Starting now, the Poetry Fishbowl is open! Today's theme is "Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic." I will be checking this page periodically throughout the day. When people make suggestions, I'll pick some and weave them together into a poem ... and then another ... and so on. I'm hoping to get a lot of ideas and a lot of poems.
I'm also allowing the inverse: "Any sufficiently advanced magic is indistinguishable from technology." Some nations in The Ocracies, like the Plutocracy of Aurea, have built much of their civilization on this.
Among my more relevant series:
Frankenstein's Family involves early-idiom science that can do some things modern-science can't.
The Godship Wanderers features a living ship and a variety of alien technology unfamliar to the characters.
Laquerware is Edopunk about technology built in layers.
P.I.E. is urban fantasy where magic and technology sometimes mix.
Polychrome Heroics has a great deal of gizmology and super-gizmology, along with some people whose superpowers blend magic and science.
The Steamsmith features alchemy instead of the science that underlies our world, which looks magical but follows the principles of scientific method.
The Blueshift Troupers is far-future SF featuring some alien technology, including hiveships and jumpgates, that nobody really knows how it works.
Schrodinger's Heroes is quantum science fiction about saving the world from alternate dimensions. What Alex does with the laws of physics can look like magic to anyone else.
Or you can ask for something new.
Currently eligible bingo card(s) for donors wishing to sponsor a square:
End of Summer Bingo Card 8-2-19
Hurt/Comfort Bingo Card 6-18-19
Click to read the linkback poem "The Beautiful Thing About Fear" (11 verses, Officer Pink).
What Is a Poetry Fishbowl?
Writing is usually considered a solitary pursuit. One exception to this is a fascinating exercise called a "fishbowl." This has various forms, but all of them basically involve some kind of writing in public, usually with interaction between author and audience. A famous example is Harlan Ellison's series of "stories under glass" in which he sits in a bookstore window and writes a new story based on an idea that someone gives him. Writing classes sometimes include a version where students watch each other write, often with students calling out suggestions which are chalked up on the blackboard for those writing to use as inspiration.
In this online version of a Poetry Fishbowl, I begin by setting a theme; today's theme is "Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic." I invite people to suggest characters, settings, and other things relating to that theme. Then I use those prompts as inspiration for writing poems.
Cyberfunded Creativity
I'm practicing cyberfunded creativity. If you enjoy what I'm doing and want to see more of it, please feed the Bard. The following options are currently available:
1) Sponsor the Fishbowl -- Here is a PayPal button for donations. There is no specific requirement, but $1 is the minimum recommended size for PayPal transactions since they take a cut from every one. You can also donate via check or money order sent by postal mail. If you make a donation and tell me about it, I promise to use one of your prompts. Anonymous donations are perfectly welcome, just won't get that perk. General donations will be tallied, and at the end of the fishbowl I’ll post a list of eligible poems based on the total funding; then the audience can vote on which they want to see posted.
2) Swim, Fishie, Swim! -- A feature in conjunction with fishbowl sponsorship is this progress meter showing the amount donated. There are multiple perks, the top one being a half-price poetry sale on one series when donations reach $300.
3) Buy It Now! -- Gakked from various e-auction sites, this feature allows you to sponsor a specific poem. If you don't want to wait for some editor to buy and publish my poem so you can read it, well, now you don't have to. Sponsoring a poem means that I will immediately post it on my blog for everyone to see, with the name of the sponsor (or another dedicate) if you wish; plus you get a nonexclusive publication right, so you can post it on your own blog or elsewhere as long as you keep the credits intact. You'll need to tell me the title of the poem you want to sponsor. I'm basing the prices on length, and they're comparable to what I typically make selling poetry to magazines (semi-pro rates according to Duotrope's Digest).
0-10 lines: $5
11-25 lines: $10
26-40 lines: $15
41-60 lines: $20
Poems over 60 lines, or with very intricate structure, fall into custom pricing.
4) Commission a scrapbook page. I can render a chosen poem in hardcopy format, on colorful paper, using archival materials for background and any embellishments. This will be suitable for framing or for adding to a scrapbook. Commission details are here. See latest photos of sample scrapbooked poems: "Sample Scrapbooked Poems 1-24-11"
5) Spread the word. Echo or link to this post on your Dreamwidth, other blog, Twitter, Facebook, Digg, StumbleUpon, or any other social network. Useful Twitter hashtags include #poetryfishbowl and #promptcall. Encourage people to come here and participate in the fishbowl. If you have room for it, including your own prompt will give your readers an idea of what the prompts should look like; ideally, update later to include the thumbnail of the poem I write, and a link to the poem if it gets published. If there is at least one new prompter or donor, I will post an extra freebie poem.
Linkback perk: I have a spare series poem available, and each linkback will reveal a verse of the poem. One person can do multiple links if they're on different services, like Dreamwidth or Twitter, rather than all on LiveJournal. Comment with a link to where you posted. "The Beautiful Thing About Fear" has 11 verses and belongs to Officer Pink.
Additional Notes
1) I customarily post replies to prompt posts telling people which of their prompts I'm using, with a brief description of the resulting poem(s). If you want to know what's available, watch for those "thumbnails."
2) You don't have to pay me to see a poem based on a prompt that you gave me. I try to send copies of poems to people, mostly using the LJ message function. (Anonymous prompters will miss this perk unless you give me your eddress.) These are for-your-eyes-only, though, not for sharing.
3) Sponsors of the Poetry Fishbowl in general, or of specific poems, will gain access to an extra post in appreciation of their generosity. While you're on the Donors list, you can view all of the custom-locked posts in that category. Click the "donors" tag to read the archive of those. I've also posted a list of other donor perks there. I customarily leave donor names on the list for two months, so you'll get to see the perk-post from this month and next.
4) After the Poetry Fishbowl concludes, I will post a list of unsold poems and their prices, to make it easier for folks to see what they might want to sponsor.
5) If donations total $100 by Friday evening then you get a free $15 poem; $150 gets you a free $20 poem; and $200 gets you a free epic, posted after the Poetry Fishbowl. These will usually be series poems if I have them; otherwise I may offer non-series poems or series poems in a different size. If donations reach $250, you get one step toward a bonus fishbowl; four of these activates the perk, and they don't have to be four months in a row. Everyone will get to vote on which series, and give prompts during the extra fishbowl, although it may be a half-day rather than a whole day. If donations reach $300, there will be a half-price sale in one series.
Feed the Fish!
Now's your chance to participate in the creative process by posting ideas for me to write about. Today's theme is "Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic." I'll be soliciting ideas for end users, new users, geeks, mechanics, designated users, inventors, Super-Gizmologists, living ships, futuristic soldiers, shysters, minions and masters/mistresses, apprentices, explorers, other people who use (or try to use, or purport to use) advanced technology, inventing tools, exploring new discoveries, creating connections, coming of age, learning what you can (and can't) do, frob twiddle and tweak, bending the laws of physics, accomplishing the impossible, recovering from setbacks, laboratories, factories, courtrooms, military bases, battlefields, supervillain lairs, police stations, public institutions, alien planets, alternate dimensions, cyberspace, other places where technology advances, gizmos, super-gizmos, ansibles, sufficiently advanced artifacts, other exotic devices, exotic materials (such as phlebotinum and unobtanium), quantum mechanics, mysterious archaeological artifacts, magical artifacts, instruction manuals (or lack thereof), user agreements, sorcery using the idiom of science, apprenticeship, fraud, free will, personal growth, determination, imprint vulnerability, failure, success, rites of passage, levels of civilization, and poetic forms in particular. But anything is welcome, really. If you manage to recommend a form that I don't recognize, I will probably pounce on it and ask you for its rules. I do have The New Book of Forms by Lewis Turco which covers most common and many obscure forms.
I'll post at least one of the fishbowl poems here so you-all can enjoy it. (Remember, you get an extra freebie poem if someone new posts a prompt or makes a donation, and additional perks at $100-$300 in donations. Linkbacks reveal verses of "The Beautiful Thing About Fear." The rest of the poems will go into my archive for future use.
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2. Shiv and/or Tolli and/or other smith types getting a supergizmologist to make proper adamant[ine] by the original meaning of the word, unbreakable.
3. Really. Good. Food.
4. The Puppetmaster in whichever of his many roles, blurring the line between science and magic and appreciating the result.
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LIFC: Tony bending the laws of physics to make tech that no-one thought possible. Bonus if Loki (or another magic user) calls Tony's tech magic because it is so advanced.
Shiv: Shiv using his powers to make the tools he needs, either for supervillainy or for blacksmithing/metal working with Tolli. I'd also like to see Shiv as Tolli's apprentice, but I think that is rather further ahead in the timeline than the current stuff.
Berrettaflies: Stylet working in a lab post Berrettaflies, and using his unique ability to mash species together to make a new species that is actually helpful. Or possibly boosting the viability of a current species to help them survive better.
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amused and tired, or I'd search it
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(They really DID move monoliths, build automata, and enjoy the hell out of life. Every time Herodotus gets proven right about something else, I laaauugh.)
Polychrome: Supervillain lairs, possibly Fortressa's, with heavy technological defenses. Anti-teleport mechanisms.
Any: Pocket dimensions mediated by machinery, aka where all my left socks go.
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any current Known Tech you can think of that there's a myth about the technique's divine origin (for instance, weaving and the plow are inventions of Athena's)
the intersection of animism, software coding, and the hardware that's supposed to be running that software
the intersection of software coding and enchantment (I'm thinking like Rick Cook's Wizard's Bane but there's gotta be eight more ways to take that prompt, right?)
sorcery that works by manipulating tech: for instance, that camera was always going to short out because the plastic on that wire has been cracked for a while; it is provably a total coincidence that it shorted out right before it would have recorded someone doing something that the someone really didn't want to be caught doing or later identified as having done
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Shiv&Luci.. Shiv's sword has some unusual properties in his hands.
The Steamsmith meets the Singularity ... i.e what happens when you build an automatic alchemist, and it builds a better version of itself...
Edison's latest project gets well and truly out of hand...
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Also Shiv's sword.
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From the Jargon File: http://www.jargon.net/jargonfile/a/AStoryAboutMagic.html
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And perhaps someone decides to investigate just how the whales and dolphins in the Maldives make flashlights n such.
Maybe a poem from the perspective of an average person and how they perceive the various soups.
Oh! Maybe something about Rainmaker and Stillsand, et. al.
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Mrs. Love the Tommyrocker (and Farasat, if that suits).
Maryam and Old Henry diagnosing and debugging an unfamiliar system.
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(Anonymous) 2019-08-06 09:00 pm (UTC)(link)The Steamsmith: Maybe Cecily could get some alchimal adaptive equipment. (Echolocation perhaps, or like the local-earth gizmo that has you 'see' by turning light waves into sensations on your tongue.)
T-America: Tech-control power that works with anything from flint knapped arrowheads to laser cannons.
T-America or one of the scifi serieses: discussion of language as technology.
Probably T-America: Discussion of the ethics of making robots/AIs as servants or military workers.
1) If we invent a person to do work that is dangerous or underpaid, how is that different than slavery?
2) If a capitalist company stops building the robots once they are to expensive/controversial, and the robots cannot reorosuce themselves is that genocide? If yes, how to fix and whose responsibility?
Maybe T-America: An internet-bound JARVIS-like AI having a Because You Were Nice To Me bond with a disadvantaged family/friend group and protecting them. (ie helpng street kids, illegal immigrants or refugees hide in a modern society.
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I suppose Adam has to feature, being as *he* is the indistinguishable-from-magic part...
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Healing as electromagnetic field manipulation
Edison alone can create chaos. Edison and Halley together might well conjure an elemental while trying to make something...and teach it to dance.
In Schrodinger's Heroes, what would happen if the team found themselves in the midst of the Origin Stories of Ash's people?
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Terramagne, connecting back to The Lights Behind Us: Santos-Dumont was, and is, variously called both a wizard and a scientist. In Terramagne, he's also a soup. This is known. Can we see more about him, his already-extant air elemental ability, his gizmology and/or supergizmology, and that marvelous watch of his? There was also talk of that watch being passed down through the generations within his family, with the attached story that it only works as a good luck charm (i.e. enhances existing powers) if it likes you. That fits the definition of this prompt, yes? It fits it twice, if we look at the inverse. :)
Bonus points if, despite living in France, Santos-Dumont is still quietly but proudly Brazilian? I'm all a-flutter over a bunch of Lusophone characters lately...
For a couple dovetailing prompts, I know we've batted around the idea that Cartier might have thought the watch he gave his friend the aviator was a true good luck charm, and maybe didn't know the extent of the supergizmology he was working into the piece. Did Cartier have any idea? His family clearly figured it out down the line, but how quickly?
And, finally, I can't string a bunch of prompts about fantastical tech together without bringing up Professor Tesla. He may not have believed his work was anything close to magic, but...
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Done for the night!