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dialecticdreamer ([personal profile] dialecticdreamer) wrote in [personal profile] ysabetwordsmith 2014-06-02 06:03 am (UTC)

Flip needs a hug

And so does his mom, and his sister Alexa.

To Flip, his mother's name is "Mom", but I'm /aware/ that it's not, and yet that detail helps fix Flip's age in my head. Strange, and wonderful!

He's about four? Not yet in school? It's the only element that's not clear.

Lastly, I /love/ that he's biting his nails, which is something the adult Coulson did in another of your stories when stressed to the max. (Turnabout is Fair Play). Thanks for including that detail because it is /definitely/ an anchor point.

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