>> I didn't like the middle section but the last chapter pulls it all together and makes it complete and enjoyable. <<
Yay! I'm glad it came together for you in the end.
>> I sort of like Loki's regard for Clint and Dr. Erik but it was too much like a boy with the best marbles. <<
Well, he doesn't have any other model for how to relate to people yet. He just knows that he is desperately unhappy with his life and wants other people in it who will think better of him. Of course he went out and picked the best ones he could find, but now he feels bad about it because it was unsatisfying and he wound up hurting people he liked.
But to be considered one of the "best marbles" ...? Is something that Clint wanted too, and the Chitauri had to go and mess it up for both of them.
>> Loki with the basics to do something if he will just apply himself and think clearly is wonderful. <<
Honestly being separated from his wreck of a family is a good thing and will help straighten out his head a bit, despite the lousy circumstances. I think it'll help if he buckles down and does the work to get himself out of the cell.
Thank you!
Yay! I'm glad it came together for you in the end.
>> I sort of like Loki's regard for Clint and Dr. Erik but it was too much like a boy with the best marbles. <<
Well, he doesn't have any other model for how to relate to people yet. He just knows that he is desperately unhappy with his life and wants other people in it who will think better of him. Of course he went out and picked the best ones he could find, but now he feels bad about it because it was unsatisfying and he wound up hurting people he liked.
But to be considered one of the "best marbles" ...? Is something that Clint wanted too, and the Chitauri had to go and mess it up for both of them.
>> Loki with the basics to do something if he will just apply himself and think clearly is wonderful. <<
Honestly being separated from his wreck of a family is a good thing and will help straighten out his head a bit, despite the lousy circumstances. I think it'll help if he buckles down and does the work to get himself out of the cell.