>> First of all, thank you. It hasn't been a good month for me but this story made me smile regularly. <<
I'm sorry your month sucked, but glad I could help.
>> The exploring of Phil's and JARVIS' relationship was wonderfully done and it was well chosen both in the timing within the narrative and how you framed it. <<
Yay! I'm glad it worked for you.
>> With the new understanding I have of these two, well, it makes me want to go back and reread the rest with this in mind (I love going back over something with a new perspective). <<
You're welcome!
I'm sorry your month sucked, but glad I could help.
>> The exploring of Phil's and JARVIS' relationship was wonderfully done and it was well chosen both in the timing within the narrative and how you framed it. <<
Yay! I'm glad it worked for you.
>> With the new understanding I have of these two, well, it makes me want to go back and reread the rest with this in mind (I love going back over something with a new perspective). <<
That's not a bad idea.
>> I look forward to what you write next. <<
I'm happy to hear that.