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dialecticdreamer ([personal profile] dialecticdreamer) wrote in [personal profile] ysabetwordsmith 2014-04-28 03:26 pm (UTC)

Great ending

You've built a lot of subtle changes into the characters, but it was EXTREMELY gratifying to SEE the results. For Clint and Natka, it's a slower, more stable development. Satisfying, but not as surprising/rewarding as the changes in both Bruce and Tony.

Tony reached out to Bruce, and Bruce accepted. That's major, for different reasons. Tony found a way to reach Bruce at his CURRENT level, not just Bruce-the-Genius-Twin. Wow.

Bruce, ever so cautiously, moved far from his safe place, physically and emotionally...

Finally, Uncle Phil has them ALL together, and is turning a hopeful eye toward Steve.

WONDERFUL.

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