>> I've been reading your work since I found the first in this set, but I haven't felt the urge to step so far out of my comfort zone as to post a comment. <<
I'm glad you felt moved to respond. Feedback is always welcome, but not required.
>> That tentative waver between YES and NO, that subtle moment of trust just FLOORED me. Absolutely brilliantly understated and equally profound. <<
Yay! I'm glad it worked for you. Trust can be a very fragile and tentative thing, especially in the beginning. It's harder for Phil in this case because he hasn't yet realized exactly who he's dealing with. But his openness here sets the stage for much of what follows. JARVIS, like Phil, really likes it when people trust him.
Re: First comment on your work
I'm glad you felt moved to respond. Feedback is always welcome, but not required.
>> That tentative waver between YES and NO, that subtle moment of trust just FLOORED me. Absolutely brilliantly understated and equally profound. <<
Yay! I'm glad it worked for you. Trust can be a very fragile and tentative thing, especially in the beginning. It's harder for Phil in this case because he hasn't yet realized exactly who he's dealing with. But his openness here sets the stage for much of what follows. JARVIS, like Phil, really likes it when people trust him.
>> Thank you. <<
You're welcome.