ysabetwordsmith: (Fly Free)
ysabetwordsmith ([personal profile] ysabetwordsmith) wrote2023-01-04 05:34 am

Poem: "I Feel at Home with You"

This is the second freebie, thanks to new prompter [personal profile] greghousesgf.  It also fills the "I Feel at Home With You" square in my 1-1-23 card for the Public Domain Bingo fest.


"I Feel at Home with You"
-- an indriso


I feel at home with you, my heart and soul
Flung wide like spider silk across the sky
To span the gap between us, pole to pole.

We are two willows dancing, you and I,
Athwart a forest spread between us, whole
And green beneath the summer sun's keen eye.

The miles part us. Tears fall two by two.

Yet through it all, I feel at home with you.



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Notes:

The indriso is a condensed version of a sonnet.

siberian_skys: (Default)

[personal profile] siberian_skys 2023-01-04 02:17 pm (UTC)(link)
This is really lovely. I love the rhythm of it.
greghousesgf: (House Schroeder)

[personal profile] greghousesgf 2023-01-04 05:56 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, this is beautiful!!
adore: (heart eyes)

[personal profile] adore 2023-01-08 05:53 am (UTC)(link)
This is so lovely.