>> 1. Kernel Error. You write JARVIS amazingly well, and as much as the story hurts I think it might be your best. It reminds me of some of the things my twin has written in the best way.<<

Wow, that's quite a compliment. I love writing in dialect. I think it's important to use a character's own words to show their worldview.

>> 2. "Yellow fluff goes, Mew! Mew!" Yeah. Hulk with fluffs is adorable, and this line speaks to child me.<<

I confess to raiding my childhood memories of kittens for that scene.