alatefeline speaks for me, too. A nice survey of many soups, but with some noticeable vacuum in their descriptions because we don't see them in action.
"Confusticator zap gun" — love that! Ah, 't comes back: "Confusticate and bebother these dwarves. Why don't they lend a hand?" ("An Unexpected Party")
Evidently Silencio's superpower is creating silence, but you don't describe it or make it explicit.
So Qwerty's only superpower is super-immunity? • but so filled ^ determination that ^ with
"The Aikido Kid" would be the T-analog to "The Karate Kid". I can't associate "The Little Ninja" with any localverse movie, but did you know there is just such a movie in the works?
«Shirt Man is a traditional term for a warrior so adept that he went into battle protected only by his shirt, not a shield or any other armor. It works for offensive and defensive tactics.» That's confusing, because the superpower is only given further down, and I saw no indication that this referred to a superpower till I hit the second sentence. I'm still not sure what the power consists of — invulnerability? — or how offensive vs. defensive even could make a difference in a power like that. If you can't be wounded in combat, then that's that.
"She Walks in Mist"? "Iron Horses"?
«The Ensemble have 7 named lieutenants and many faceless followers.» Contretemps' organization?
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"Confusticator zap gun" — love that! Ah, 't comes back: "Confusticate and bebother these dwarves. Why don't they lend a hand?" ("An Unexpected Party")
Evidently Silencio's superpower is creating silence, but you don't describe it or make it explicit.
So Qwerty's only superpower is super-immunity?
• but so filled ^ determination that
^ with
"The Aikido Kid" would be the T-analog to "The Karate Kid". I can't associate "The Little Ninja" with any localverse movie, but did you know there is just such a movie in the works?
«Shirt Man is a traditional term for a warrior so adept that he went into battle protected only by his shirt, not a shield or any other armor. It works for offensive and defensive tactics.»
That's confusing, because the superpower is only given further down, and I saw no indication that this referred to a superpower till I hit the second sentence. I'm still not sure what the power consists of — invulnerability? — or how offensive vs. defensive even could make a difference in a power like that. If you can't be wounded in combat, then that's that.
"She Walks in Mist"? "Iron Horses"?
«The Ensemble have 7 named lieutenants and many faceless followers.» Contretemps' organization?
• Part of it collasped on him
→ collapsed
I looked up "Unsiiciyapi" to find that it's Lakota. (http://kalloch.org/lakota__four_values.htm, http://thesingingstone.com/tag/unsiiciyapi/)
So what are Protean's powers. Shapeshifting?
Kayo: Good (+2) Knowledge of Female Anatomy
That's a hoot!
• he slide an arm under a locked door
→ slid
That statue... so sad!