Again, I like the decent behavior of many of your supervillains: Somebody's hurt - give first aid! (Though I'm definitely not crazy about her robbing a convenience store... Although I can understand her frustration.)

• The gun show was not Fortress's idea of a good time.
-> Fortressa's

• "Jesus freak" is a rude term for ostentatious Christians.
> I'm not disagreeing with you, but I associate the term with a subset of those, who aggressively evangelize passersby. Those, I feel, have earned rudeness.